DarkseidEquation

The battle system of this story is very unique and it is great seeing the progression of the Zeph's character but also his abilities which increases interest in the book.

This book is very descriptive onto the characters and their emotional struggles. At first, it may seem 'edgy' but the characters have understandable emotions and their problems are portrayed in their actions but the dialogue could use some work but it's pretty great. Keep working and good luck!

Luna is an incredible protagonist and seeing how she interacts in the new world she is in really separates this story from generic different world stories.

This story is very calming and romance between Ryan and Rhea really mends it together to make it very soothing. There some spelling mistakes but not an abundance of them so I just suggest the author fix it by re-editing it. Still a great novel currently!

This book is very fascinating with the story development keeps getting better with the suspense and the great writing is due to that. If you like vampire stories then you will be immersed in this with the great world building.

This story certainly brings the emotions with the struggles that Beth and Sebastian go through and how their love keeps getting tested and it's great seeing how they go on. The vocabulary certainly does portray that and the author certainly takes their time in their craft.

This book crafts the characters greatly with the main character's progression and her dialogue to the characters as the story goes on helps prove it.

The writing is very exquisite and the author backs that up with great vocabulary used. They help build the emotions between the characters which portrays the different situations and struggles they go through.

This book has some good points where emotion is very tense. The reader helps portray the tension between both characters and it shows well with the progression of the story.

This story is very well-crafted. It's pretty obvious the writer takes care in writing to make the reader well-versed in it. There are small grammar problems but they don't affect the incredible writing you'll go through reading.