GibberishDude

Thanks :)

4.0/5 Definitely an interesting and weird (but in a good way!) story. It's fast-paced and the story develops quickly. Lots of action and mini-conflicts. There's some grammatical errors, however. For example, sometimes the story switches from past tense to present, then back again and so on. For a story told in third person like this one, I suggest keeping it in past tense, as that's what works best normally. I also would've loved to see Harrison try to adjust into his new gender, which I feel like should've happened. But other than that, keep it up, author!

I think I speak for everyone when I say that Peter is a cowardly little weasel.

Glad to hear it :)

I think this book has a very interesting and unique storyline. It kept me wanting more during most of the chapters. The characters have personalities that aren't all the same, so that's a good thing. The story developed pretty well in my opinion as well. My only complaint is there are lots of grammar/punctuation mistakes. The story is still readable, though, so it's mostly okay. Keep it up, author!

Thanks!

I'm curious to see what'll happen to Peter...

Thank you so much! Your review is much appreciated.

Great plot; the characters are developed well. The grammar and punctuation are excellent. If there were any tense mistakes, I missed them. It was fun to read and I liked it!