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RetricBlast

RetricBlast

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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Viriti

    Sky Beasts are the actual species. I'll be diving deeper into them with the aux chapters I'm planning on releasing later today (thank you for motivating me to make them, by the way. Anymore feedback is welcomed). Hope that clears the question up.

    Ch 10 First Flight
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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Viriti

    I had aux chapters planned for this weekend since I am on my break and can get to them, but can you explain what else needs explaining? It'll help a lot while I'm working on them either later today or early tomorrow. Thanks.

    Ch 2 Age of Recruitment
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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Viriti

    I won't reveal anything, but her's is his daughter, yes. Its still male MC, but the daughter isn't being brought into the series until much later on.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Cyclxne

    Fixed it, sorry.

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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Cyclxne

    Except Danitour won't end up like Laskhmi-2.

    Danitour nodded and looked up. He saw all the silent Ferals looking down at them, their eyes seemed vicious and hungry... to him.
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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Cyclxne

    A Legion that tried to claim Krugi by force.

    But Danitour stayed there because of his memories. He had a dark past, a little secret only a few know about. Those who defended against the Breckus Legion knew about it.
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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Cyclxne

    Considering Ether is drastically shorter than the average Zegus and has a different kind of hairstyle than Zegus, it's easy to detect Ether from a group of Zegus. But to answer the main question: Ferals hunt Threshers whenever food is running very low, to do this they simply look for unstable soil mounds. That usually means there's a Thresher family inside.

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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
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    I've read the original version of this novel, and let me tell you all right now: you'll fall in love. It's difficult enough to keep me hooked into a novel, but somehow this one made me want to come back and read more. The characters bounce off one another pretty well, and the conversations feel real. And some characters here are very unlike the ones I've read. Most of the time it's this guy or girl who is in perfect condition, but in this novel there are some characters who have disabilities and have to make it up in other ways. It's some fresh air from ocean of perfectly fit and capable characters out there. The story is also good, I like the direction it's going so far and would really love to stick to it until the very end. Too long, didn't read: give it a try, some unique characters that aren't the basic perfectly fit character, good story, and amazing writing.

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    The Legendary Ghost Hunter
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    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Cyclxne

    Instead, she climbs a tree!

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    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Cyclxne

    Most of their time together was focused on other things. Can't blame him.

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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Cyclxne

    It's a mistake by my end, obviously. I forgot to put 'in unison' somewhere.

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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Cyclxne

    Yes he was. Like I mentioned earlier in the chapter, they used to kill Strem for practice back inside the Light Legion. It's like killing a bug and killing another person. You wouldn't care if you killed a bug, but you would obviously care if you killed another person.

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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Maryam_Zahoor

    Thank you. This question is a difficult one, honestly. My best answer is picking other things apart and going crazy with the results.

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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Posted

    The story so far is very good. The characters are also well written so far. And the tag of an interesting story is well deserved, would recommend.

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    The game of revenge
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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
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    The writing quality could use some work but it's still readable. Published chapters are coming out at a good pace and it transitions from chapter to chapter very well. Good job!

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    My Time System
    Fantasy · Itsuki_Suzuki
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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
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    Who knew just 2 chapters was enough to hook someone in? The author did an amazing job at setting up the main character for a real good twist later on. I can tell the story is going in the right direction. Good work, would recommend!

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    Ride Or Die With Me
    Fantasy · Eshal_Shahnawaz
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    RetricBlast2yr
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    I have to say, I really liked the origins behind the setting of the starting chapters. The characters themselves flowed very well with one another. The author also did a really good job at painting a picture using words for the readers. I'd highly recommend.

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    Rightful Vengeance
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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Cyclxne

    The one and only.

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    Dummy Novel 9998
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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Cyclxne

    Digon by itself is just a mountain. Thawed believe otherwise because of the guardians.

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    Dummy Novel 9998
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  • RetricBlast
    RetricBlast2yr
    Replied to Cyclxne

    I was originally thinking of adding a Variant like this but couldn't think of ways to make them unique from all the others. The idea is interesting and I'll probably add it in as a mutation for a Variant but will need to think about those more.

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    Dummy Novel 9998
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