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oho imagine if we end up collabing, and Kai's real name is Xuan Kai

Just by reading the first three chapters, I can already tell that this novel has great potential! The first few chapters are mainly about building the environment and introducing the different kinds of races in the novel. From a hooking start to an interesting plot concept, I definitely recommend this novel to anyone looking for an exciting binge-read at 2 AM :) ~~ feedback: My only advice would be to try keeping the writing consistent and smooth, just to make the novel an easier read ^^ Keep it up; looking forward to more chapters ( ﾟヮﾟ)/

I'll keep that in mind... I have a habit of writing too much (¯▿¯)

Very interesting! The beginning is mainly introducing the characters and getting a feel of the environment. The novel is easy to read and flows well without any grammatical mistakes. Overall, it was quite a pleasant reading experience. If you're looking for an exciting, apocalyptic-type book, this one is perfect for you. This novel has great potential! Looking forward to more chapters ^^

Thank you! I'll be sure to do that ^^

fixed ~

A gripping story! The beginning gives a solid introduction to the status and environment of the protagonist, clearly depicting the current means of survival. I personally really enjoyed the little touch of mystery added to the first few chapters, with the identity of the protagonist being half shrouded in darkness. The writing flowed nicely and did not have any grammar errors. This is the type of novel that really makes you think. It effortlessly submerges you into the story, leaving you craving for the next chapter. All in all, it was quite an enjoyable read. Looking forward to future chapters ^^

Interesting story! Has a hooking start, and interesting character developments. At first, it might seem like the typical cliché stuck-in-a-videogame type novel, but I can assure you, it's much more than that. The first few chapters are simply character introductions and setting up the environment, but I expect the story to skyrocket as more chapters are released. Overall, this was definitely an easy read, with hardly any grammatical mistakes or inconsistent writing flow. ;) Definitely recommend this light novel to anyone who's looking for an exciting joy read at 2 am!

This story is certainly one of a kind, with the unique backstory and hooking start! Did not find any issues with grammar or inconsistent writing, it was more or less quite an enjoyable read! It's interesting to see how much a broken heart can affect a person, changing them from the worse to the better... or maybe the other way around. ;) This story has great potential; looking forward to more chapters!

OOOOHHHHH THE ENDING!!! *I will choose a third option* that's really creative ahhh, I love it

Ooh, a hooking start! My only advice would be to try and lead up to the sudden stabbing a little more. (Or maybe you'll explain it later on in the story too, that also works :3) It all happened so fast, I didn't fully realize what was going on, haha. Other than that, I definitely enjoyed reading this ^^

Personally, I actually find it really useful how you added all the basic necessary information we need to know at the very start of your book. It makes for some easy access and quick references to look back on, for events later on in the book.

Definitely an easy read! This is the kind of book you'd binge-read at 3 am on a weekday. The beginning starts off by introducing the characters and taking a dive into the memories of the protagonist. However, as the story goes on, the events darken little by little, as everything the protagonist has ever loved, slowly crumbles away into nothingness. It leaves you wondering what will happen next, with the emotions of the main character teetering unpredictably at the edge. Very enjoyable to read, looking forward to new chapters! ^^

Ah yes, I'll edit those first few chapters to make it a little easier to read, thank you (｡◝‿◜｡)

I like how there's a Chinese take on the storyline of the book. Really makes for some diverse character selections with an overall interesting plot, intertwining with tradition.