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Review Detail of Cyclxne in Wishing for Rain

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Cyclxne
CyclxneLv23yrCyclxne

I'll be really concise and to-the-point in this review. Writing Quality - not much to complain about with the exception of the first two chapters having Godzilla-length paragraphs that really hurt my eyes. Stability of Updates - Uh...yes. Hopefully, the author starts uploading daily and more consistently. Story Development - Good. Flawless transitions from one scene to another, and good pacing as well. Character Design - Colorful characters, each with a unique personality to them. Well described, and leaves room for further development down the line. World Background - Good. It was a bit confusing at first, because I had no idea who was the real MC, but it became clear that all of that was just laying the groundwork for the true protagonist. The whole concept with spirits and humans is pretty cool as well, as it takes a fantasy-esque twist on the real world's understanding of how the Ouroboros cycle works, and what the afterlife is. Overall, a great read. Looking forward to more chapters.

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Wishing for Rain

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Ah yes, I'll edit those first few chapters to make it a little easier to read, thank you (。◝‿◜。)