Review Detail of Xuyoon in Dummy Novel 9998

Just by reading the first three chapters, I can already tell that this novel has great potential! The first few chapters are mainly about building the environment and introducing the different kinds of races in the novel. From a hooking start to an interesting plot concept, I definitely recommend this novel to anyone looking for an exciting binge-read at 2 AM :) ~~ feedback: My only advice would be to try keeping the writing consistent and smooth, just to make the novel an easier read ^^ Keep it up; looking forward to more chapters ( ﾟヮﾟ)/