The story adopts the use of very vivid imagery. It is easy to follow and fun to read. Expecting more chapters.

Why am I inlove with ash already?

The story is captivating and the character very well rounded. The author did a terrific job.

yeah he is a jerk, I can't excuse that,lol

There are errors I'm aware, I'll proofread as soon as I can, thanks.

Great read for those into this type of story, nice character development and plot. Looking forward to more chapters

The story is intriguing, the mystery at the start makes you curious about the characters, great writing.

Thanks, others have mentioned it, I'll be mindful in future updates

Its not every day you see a strong and determined FL. The author did an amazing job with the plot and character development, I won't lie, I'm hooked already, I'll keep reading and see how this ends.

I love it, your writing style is legit

Nice intro, makes me want to keep reading

This is my ideal kind of book, if you're a vampire lover like myself and buckle up because you're in for a very exciting ride through the life of our FL Dina... Very well written and captivating

The book is totally worth a hundred 5stars. The author really poured himself into the story, I just couldn't stop reading...This is one of the best romance novels I have read on the read here, Weldon author.

The character buildup is great, the plot is entertaining and the story overall is really interesting, the story is easy to follow . The author did a good one here...

The novel is a really good one. The plot is nice and the characters are entertaining, if you can ignore the little grammatical errors you'll definitely enjoy it.

I have never been a fan of this type of novel but I'm in love with this book. Everything from the writing style, word use, and world description is simply on point., The author has a masterpiece here, congrats author.

I love the way the author took his time to explain the concept of the strings and how it worked. The story has a nice plot, the Mc is fierce, I like that. Nice work.

Thank you for reading. As regards to the questions you asked, im not sure what chapter you stopped at but i did try to g o back and explain certain details like how they met, why she was scared initially( not because she hates him but because she thought he was a ghost) and all of that. But I'll try to slow down and give more details in subsequent chapters. Thanks.

Okay, I'm up for fighting demons 👹 From the very first chapter, the book engages its readers, the action doesn't come too late to which adds to the fun.

The book is interesting, different in its plot and setting. I love how the mc was introduced although I felt the mountain of information in the first chapter made it confusing, I love the book. Good job author.