This is a personal review from someone that doesn't have any exprience in writing but read hundreds of books i read two of your novels, and this one is much more focus in "Will" against the heaven. But i hardly feel any strong emotion that needed to forge his will knowing that his final enemy is the heaven itself. Please let me grit my teeth, let me feel the rage, let me cry in his desperation.Give him and us a reason why we should continue the journey. "Will is forged by desperation not by inspiration"

Author-san when would you kill kevin? can u make him the ultimate fcking sacrifices? hes is f annoying to the point of me wanting to kill the ren because he write kevin in his novel

Current chapter:63 This is my taste in novels, just light and pure of bliss. Not much mysteries but the MC's move and action are logical. The system is atleast well explain although its not explain crystal clear it still clear as tap water. What i wang the most is the potential of this story, Theres so many direction for it. The only issue is the updating stability which is terrible, cant even do 1 chap per day even when the mtl is in 300+ chapts hayyaaah

I love this novel. It may look that its just common because of summary but u need too count the execution of this novel. Even if theres so many novels out there with the same vibed and theme, I can say that this is different and much enjoying. The characters is well defined, all of them have certaing personalities thats not to much to make it cliech. The goldfinger(cheat) of the MC is u can sya OP in some ways but theres also restriction on it. And he also need to explore the power of his cheat himself and this is where the other author failed. But the author of this novel didnt fail like other. He make clear explaintion in it and examples to make it more understandable.Yes he will get some OP itmes but he will not be consider as OP in his world because there are more people strong than hin and theres also a bigger world called celestial world. Im giving respect for the author and translator for the beautiful execution of this novel

The start is kinda rough but it got a lot of potential just keep writing till the impurities vanished. And don't use so much "He", just describe it in other term and explore ur own style of writing

I feel regretful for this story. The ability of author to write is cagging his imagination. I bet u all read this because of his system and it's potential. Yeah overall the idea is so amazing but there's always some details that left out. Even me as a reader need to think so much just to underunderstand the capabilities and limit of system. There's also some things that really confusing like how did the current world didn't even have any idea about laptop that they called it "unknown object". I also noticed that the author is making the side character so dumb so that the mc will stand out. hayyy.. This is only my say about this novel and I'm still reading it and hoping that the later chapters will be better

I like this story but i hope that the author or translator use more simple words and dont make the simple things complicated.

I already read hundreds of novels but this is the first time that i feel so refresh at the first chapter. Author do a magnificent work in this chapter i hope it will continue

Did you saw one? the lets wait for the green light to come