my self is love
Ceritanya Alifah ini benar2 benar beda dari yg lain sih... Aku amaze lihat Kamu nyantumin banyak Ayat Al Quran dan kasih edukasi yang bagus soal agama terutama di novel Kamu, kayanya jarnag juga novel yg temanya kaya novel Kamu. Karakter Alifa sendiri, Aku lumayan suka tapi masih agak bias, mungkin perlu dikembangin lagi ya... Kadang kalau nulis cerita yang sangat straight, emang agak dilema sih... Maqu dibuat straight banget atau ada melencengnya, semangat terus ya pokoknya!!!!
jangan alifah, bukan mahram!!!!
Hi dear, We have same interesting story, writing novel based from Korea. I'm enjoying your plot story. I know that yours is MAKJANG enough, Korean drama typically. But it's ok because this is the genre which is still enjoyed a lot if people. I still read some early chaps, I found that the Man is in villain mode, I still couldn't guess where the story would bring us. Still clueless but it's fine because not many story who involved married man as male lead in General romance story. Hwaiting Author!!!! -Hyeona-
The story could relate with office workers, unfortunately sometime woman couldn't be respected and became unappropriate jokes. Meta had to face a lot of challenge in work life. her friendship with kinan is a kind a beautiful relationship. For the beginning of the story is explained for detail, author describe the physical of character spesifically, imho it's good thing, but it doesn't need mentioned some times. The conflict has been appeared in early chapter, I enjoy the story. Keep spirit and hopefully the story is going to be hyped.
after I read some chaps. I decided to review. The story maybe typical strerotype story about an affair in the marriage, but this story has had many of fans because it happened in life reality. the villain is clearly pointed, she is basically bitch. Sabil will have strong development character, right? She has soft hearted character, but she will get revenge to Tommy, I hope Tomy will get punishment well before sabil apologize him.
it's very interesting story, the triangle love about winda, luis, and ari. Winda is a such soft hearted, beautiful girl, and devouted daughter. Luis is just interesting with her, but Winda has had a relationship with Ari. The plot is considered quick enough and on point of the story from the main characters, I will be curious how is Winda going to deal with her own heart about her relationship with ari? We are the readers still have to guess how Luis will play with Winda heart.