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HYEONA

HYEONA

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my self is love

2019-01-19 JoinedIndonesia
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA1yr
    Posted

    saya tertarik membacanya berawal dari sinopsisnya. kalimat demi kalimatnya rapi dan memiliki struktur bahasa baku yang enak dibaca sehingga pembaca sangat mudah memahami alurnya karena seringkali masih banyak author yang kirang pandai menyusun kalimat baku agar enak dibaca. semangat terus ya authornya

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    LOVE SICKNESS
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA1yr
    Commented

    so far, chaps 1 cukup menarik

    Ch 1 ONE
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    LOVE SICKNESS
    Urban · Blueside
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA2yr
    Replied to Vcupid

    iya kak gapapa. makaih y atas msukannya

    Ch 6 -5- Employee
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    I Love You, Goodbye
    Urban · HYEONA
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA2yr
    Replied to Sefrie_Ajah

    Maaf ya kak, ini lagi proses perapian kak. insyaAllah bab selanjutnya udah lebih rapi

    Ch 83 82. Penyesalan
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    I Love You, Goodbye
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Posted

    Ceritanya Alifah ini benar2 benar beda dari yg lain sih... Aku amaze lihat Kamu nyantumin banyak Ayat Al Quran dan kasih edukasi yang bagus soal agama terutama di novel Kamu, kayanya jarnag juga novel yg temanya kaya novel Kamu. Karakter Alifa sendiri, Aku lumayan suka tapi masih agak bias, mungkin perlu dikembangin lagi ya... Kadang kalau nulis cerita yang sangat straight, emang agak dilema sih... Maqu dibuat straight banget atau ada melencengnya, semangat terus ya pokoknya!!!!

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    Alifah, Kaulah yang Kumau
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Commented

    Yasss, I agree (tapi novel aku ceritanya banyak yg pacran. mau nangis...)

    Pacaran? No way
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    Alifah, Kaulah yang Kumau
    Teen · syafiuni
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Commented

    sallallahu alaihi wasallam

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    Alifah, Kaulah yang Kumau
    Teen · syafiuni
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Commented

    semua anak di dunia kayanya benci hari senin deh, heheheh

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    Alifah, Kaulah yang Kumau
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Commented

    jangan alifah, bukan mahram!!!!

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    Alifah, Kaulah yang Kumau
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Posted

    Hi dear, We have same interesting story, writing novel based from Korea. I'm enjoying your plot story. I know that yours is MAKJANG enough, Korean drama typically. But it's ok because this is the genre which is still enjoyed a lot if people. I still read some early chaps, I found that the Man is in villain mode, I still couldn't guess where the story would bring us. Still clueless but it's fine because not many story who involved married man as male lead in General romance story. Hwaiting Author!!!! -Hyeona-

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    Hidden Wife : Best Husband
    Urban · Nayya_Phrustazies
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Posted

    The story could relate with office workers, unfortunately sometime woman couldn't be respected and became unappropriate jokes. Meta had to face a lot of challenge in work life. her friendship with kinan is a kind a beautiful relationship. For the beginning of the story is explained for detail, author describe the physical of character spesifically, imho it's good thing, but it doesn't need mentioned some times. The conflict has been appeared in early chapter, I enjoy the story. Keep spirit and hopefully the story is going to be hyped.

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    The Lady In My Bed
    Urban · PrincesAuntum
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Replied to HYEONA

    -from My CEO' s Heart writer-

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    Don’t Take My Husband
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Posted

    after I read some chaps. I decided to review. The story maybe typical strerotype story about an affair in the marriage, but this story has had many of fans because it happened in life reality. the villain is clearly pointed, she is basically bitch. Sabil will have strong development character, right? She has soft hearted character, but she will get revenge to Tommy, I hope Tomy will get punishment well before sabil apologize him.

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    Don’t Take My Husband
    Urban · julietasyakur
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Commented

    bitch laras

    "This is all because of you Sabila, if only at that time you didn't appear in Tommy's life, maybe now I would have married him instead of Rahman." Laras grumbled annoyed.
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    Don’t Take My Husband
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Replied to kasmalieyna

    Thank you for coming

    Ch 53 CEO -52-
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    My CEO's Heart
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Posted

    it's very interesting story, the triangle love about winda, luis, and ari. Winda is a such soft hearted, beautiful girl, and devouted daughter. Luis is just interesting with her, but Winda has had a relationship with Ari. The plot is considered quick enough and on point of the story from the main characters, I will be curious how is Winda going to deal with her own heart about her relationship with ari? We are the readers still have to guess how Luis will play with Winda heart.

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    Destined Husband: In A Heartbeat
    Urban · Pena_aQuina
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Commented

    so, winda had no idea about the difference of their belief as long as approaching term?

    At that time they were walking on the beach enjoying the beautiful scenery, white sand, clear blue sea water, towering beach cliffs overgrown with green plants standing firmly on either side of the beach. Sweet times when the relationship was still as long as corn. They sat in the gazebo of the beachside restaurant, enjoying seafood and young coconuts. When they were relaxing after filling their stomachs, I heard the sound of the call to prayer heard in Winda's ears, then she invited Ari to worship, but Ari said "Honey, I don't worship the way you do. My beliefs are not the same as yours. Our way of worship is different" answered Ari.
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    Destined Husband: In A Heartbeat
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Commented

    windaaaa

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    Destined Husband: In A Heartbeat
    Urban · Pena_aQuina
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Replied to Henny_Siregar

    iya kak... maaf ya

    Ch 41 CEO -40-
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    My CEO's Heart
    General · HYEONA
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  • HYEONA
    HYEONA3yr
    Replied to Astuty_Wahyuni

    iya kak... sangat menyesakkan

    Ch 4 -3- Pamit
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    I Love You, Goodbye
    Urban · HYEONA
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