Xissaer

No divorce! I hope she tragically dies.

Oh Gloriana, how I hate you

Why is Gloriana so glorianiesque? It's infuriating.

I hate Gloriana so f** ng much!!!

Funny how the author forgot about 16 hours playtime a day rule. And about MC's mother, who he definitely could've met again in real world.

Excessive use of a word 'seriously' in the opening paragraphs. You should seriously fix it.

This novel is a load of steaming elephant sh..t. Untalented retelling of dumb clichés.

If the heroine is up against a two dimensional soap opera villain, then we as readers are not respecting her. Great heroines struggle through adversity, making us respect her path. "You are your enemies".

You, sir, are no writer, you are a mathematician.

There is stupid, and there is too much stupid. This novel is the latter.