haha

tnx for the compliment

all right will do tnx

hahha

death is my beginning

hmm ill try it to some ch

Well, i cant helped it because I immediately publish after putting it all in a draft, so they are many typos and some things to be edited. But i appreciate the time you spend in reading this, I'll try to improve so that I can deliver the story well

thanks

thanks, im just used in using poetry and i tried to fuse it in a story~

hahha... give me a break for the grammatical errors, you already know it since college. Well that cant be helped Dyne is born to be cute!

Waaa thank you~ sorry for the grammatical errors but I am trying to find some editor so that it will be polish thanks for the support~

the drama and the mystery intensify, these typea of novel is not my bread and butter but you did a good job how you portrait your characters, its like im reading a cinema film. I finished all the chapters just now so cant wait to have more

thanks for your thoughts about this book , dont worry the chapters are already in draft. Give it time and it will be publish soon

thank you for a wonderful review~ the chapters will be more intense as ever so stay tune

Hoh, this is quite interesting approach and the title i thought its a sci-fi or fantasy like but this mystery is new to me. Keep on updating looking forward to it~

thank you very much for a great review and dont worry, the other chapters are already drafted im just editing a little bit to publish those~

yes yes thank you~

A third person murder~ All right~

whoooo an isekai genre, I have read many isekai genre a numerous times, some are cliche, some are traditional or the trending ones, for this one it is very unexpected. I like how the MC wanted to be liberated to her bad ending and specially how u describe magic and battle scenes. It is very refreshing to see such detailed battle scene and world building of magic, tho I commented some paragraph with small error please do not mind. I am engrossed to your story that's why I saw those errors but overall this is a good story~ Looking forward how will you bring the bad end to a good one? Will it be cliche, traditional or will give you me surprise, I am very eager to find out~

Thanks a lot~ Please look forward more to this story~