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It's a unique concept that is developed quite interestingly by the author. It's not your usual story and isn't that cliché. Very well inspired and good quality of writing. The only issue is that sometimes you can feel that the chapters are not reread due to small typos and long, drawn-out sentences. But these small mistakes can be easily fixed with an editor.

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Well, i cant helped it because I immediately publish after putting it all in a draft, so they are many typos and some things to be edited. But i appreciate the time you spend in reading this, I'll try to improve so that I can deliver the story well