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Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack

作者: FanficMortal
アニメ·コミックス
完結 · 18.8M ビュー
  • 277 章
    コンテンツ
  • 4.6
    564 レビュー結果
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An ordinary soul from Earth mysteriously transmigrates into One Piece World. What's more, he was presented with a Gift Pack from God. Follow his journey, from being a slave to an extraordinary existence that everyone fears.

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A man from an Earth gets the choice to start over in any Universe and chooses an Alternate Pokemon Universe. Let us see if his journey to the top is succesful and the impact he will have on his new world. Pokemon is owned by Nintendo, Game Freak and Creatures Inc. I just use their sandbox for the plot of my MC and my OCs. This will be a "slow" paced story, in fact it's "super slow paced", so please don't expect the MC to directly start his journey in 20 chapters or so, actually multiply that by like 15. A lot is going to happen before that happens. The first 10-20 chapters or so are information heavy, depending on what kind of reader you are. I try to keep my chapter length between 2000 and 3000 words per chapter. My release rate is 4 chapter/week for now. I have a patre*n for those that want to support me with access to some advance chapters as a thank you. patre*n.com/Azrail93 This is an alternate pokemon universe so there will be differences to the games, manga and anime. So if something in the story is different it is most likely on purpose. The original sources are seen as suggestions not laws. Differences can be: Type variants, evolution conditions, strength mechanics, world building and more. If I am at some point asking for reader input I will do so but otherwise I will ignore most suggestions. So please don't spam things like catch this pokemon or do that next. I have my plot planned and external input will be considered when asked for. If I see a suggestion that I believe fit my plot flow I will use it and will credit the commentor. Comments on spelling and grammar mistakes are welcome. I will try to correct said mistakes with time. Constructive criticism will be read and considered. Insult and hate comments will be ignored or deleted depending on severity. Readers naturally can comment their dislike but one worders will be ignored. If the reason for the dislike is explained I will read it. Like previously mentioned pure insults and hate comments will be ignored or deleted. The same is true for simple hate reviews or insulting ones. Reviews complaining about something I warned about, such as the slow pace, will be deleted as well.

Azrail93 · アニメ·コミックス
4.6
824 Chs
目次
0 :Auxiliary Volume
1 :One Piece - Rise

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  • リリース頻度安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界観設定
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Review after chapter 85 {>°<} This story is near painfully average. The MC is average, his DF is supposedly super OP but only at endgame but so is potentially any DF. His only other power, which could potentially grant him near godly powers after some training, is nerfed to oblivion and he's only slight toucher skinned with a healing factor. His talent is average for someone meant for New World, I'd say his talent is below Luffy by 50%. He spends 4-6 years doing what Luffy did in 2-3. And in a meta perspective, he doesn't have anything unique about him. His situation is average for someone going thru marine training in the Elite course with contrarian ambitions. He is constantly punished for slights against the WG but basically accepts it, making excuses that with his System, he can cope. Which is true, but it doesn't mean he has to lose gains because of corrupt marines! This MC is too honest but without the plot armor rewards. His Conquerer's Haki is undeserved because, despite it being strong, he doesn't really show the qualities of a King. He really lacks the natural charisma to have a good crew/support base etc. His CH is awakened by a random trick while he has no clue about the there two. It's pretty embarrassing for an Isekai person imo. He doesn't really use future knowledge other than as a Pokedex, ooing and aaing when meeting famous characters. Sure he saves Kuina but that girl isn't important at all other than in fanfiction. Finally, his face is too average! Seriously, no sign of a romantic interest in almost 90 chapters. The barely a thing with Gion was cut by small betrayal and separation and it almost feels like he things of nothing but fighting and food. He's like discount Goku, the discounts being the paragraphs above.

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