The Walking Dead, John Adler

This story is basically the T.V. show written down scene by scene. The reincarnated character is already extremely OP before the story even starts. The character actions are so insignificant to the story that if he was removed nothing would change. Not even the dialog changes because he's there. The author probably sits in front of his screen watching the show and just writing whatever he sees.

Killing zombies thats Cool. Also like the story.

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this version is more informative and not as fast paced as your other version which made no sense. *************************************************

This isn't a fanfic, this just a cheap copy of the show nothing different at all.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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The mix of present tense, third person, and simplistic prose makes it seem like more of a list of events, rather than an actual story. The cheats/3 wishes granted are totally world breaking and undermine any effort made by the characters. There isn't much character development, and there isn't even much dialogue, and what little there is is false and unnatural. I'm not keen, but good luck with your novel.

the author basically added the mc into the original twd plot. The story follows 90% of the canon changing few things because of the small actions of the mc. I don't like the way the author writes, it seems more like a record of events, very few dialogues and the ones that have are the same as in the original series. Anyway, this is my opinion after 20 chapters, I will continue reading because I hope that this ff improves and there are not many ff with twd theme.

Well, this story should be taken with great care and patience. The good thing is that ... I don't know, the MC saves some characters and maybe changes in the future for something better? .... and well the bad, at least for 12 chapters it is only a summary of the series, with a character in the background that only says a few sentences and that's all, literally the character does not matter and is even ignored and forgotten by others (the Mc until he wonders why they ignore him), as an example when rick finds the bicycle, he abandons Mc. And the Mc runs after him until he reaches his house ... and the atlanta bow literally passes from his face. the worst thing is that after chapter 12 he kind of remembers that he can do something and it is a 180 °. Alone and out of nowhere with things that he didn't use in the middle of the chapters, he deletes 30,000 zombies. (lightsabers, nanotechnology, super cars) I do not know the author's plans, but if it is taken as a parody it is a good comedy story, you know to pass the time, after all the story does not take itself seriously. I recommend reading it, but taking into account that it is better not to expect great things and as a recommendation for the author, a story can suck in the world background as long as the protagonist is interesting, so developing the Mc is important and urgent, after all only the name of the character and other information that does not say anything about him is known. go ahead author and don't let the story fall.

Read 6 chapters so far. Very satisfying to be immersed in TWD universe again, but inserting a new character with god given magical powers feels like a distraction. I have to ask why this was written. What is the point? I don't mean this negatively, but I am honestly curious. Will read more to see how John is woven into the plot. Hoping the story takes on a new life of its own... Keep up the good work.

it's literally just the walking dead but with an oc that sits in the back and listens to everything that is going on and so far has contributed nothing to the actual story itself.

Anti 5star ................................................................................................

alright guys for anyone that want a story that have the theme of the walking dead this is not the place in this story the author destroyed the concept of survival to the strongest as it was shown in original one and made his mc one of those who want to help humanity survive insted of fucusing only on him self and his group add to that the fact that he gave him a system that give him all kind of armes and technologie for free so in another point this story is for anyone who want a soft hearted mc that wont kill (humas) unless he is in the most extrem position and want to read a walking dead story that lack the original concept of surviving with the most of the goor, the blood and cruality of the original story removed then this is your story it has a good quality writing stable update good story development in all it is a good story for those with soft hearth

Просто мусор . Я зря потратил своё время ...................................................................................................

Well, if you are looking for a copy paste story that is word for word what was in the tv series only with a SI that adds no real spice to they story aside hogging beauties in a world that already lacks populace, then this is the story to read. I feel like I'm re-watching TWD as the chapters are word for word copy pasted from the show, but all the boring stuff was kept out, and the Author placed an OP character that doesn't even use 1/1 millionth of the power he has as all he does is follows the plot and takes women he fancy's, while these women don't even second guess the harem choice and just roll with it. The story could be a lot better if the Author broke off from the main story and started his own settlement where he can create his own harem, but he's not even considered the leader of the main series group as he is seen as a vice-leader, and it says this in a chapter. I'll still be reading because I like TWD, and there is just enough minor changes that I can say is better then what the main series went with

I was honestly disappointed, no additional plot twists nor its own story. "copy paste of the original TWD plus a side character-observer self insert MC. quite sad. :(

everything is fine except girl parts where he catch girl like pokemon 1 or 2 is ok but 5 6 is to much that iits don't know if mc continue this Pokemon games

Like almost all works about zombies, it doesn't achieve anything. Most people forget that the United States of America is the home of guns. There are more weapons than people, let alone ammunition... This is only counting private weapons. A plea to all authors: If you want to paint a picture where humanity is overwhelmed by zombies, don't set it in America, that's not realistic.

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Makes zero sense, has infinite store but steals clothes, slaughtered 10,000 zombies but no one knows where the bodies went, zero real dialogue just small explanations then 1-6 time skips