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The Black Princess Chi

作者: Mishal_Mishi
Fantasy Romance
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What is The Black Princess Chi

WebNovel で公開されている、Mishal_Mishi の作者が書いた The Black Princess Chi の小説を読んでください。In a world of Magical Beasts and Humans, the Chi family, bearers of an ancient prophecy, face a chilling fate: a cursed princess destined to bring disaster. When she's born, the sacred Black Rose vani...

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In a world of Magical Beasts and Humans, the Chi family, bearers of an ancient prophecy, face a chilling fate: a cursed princess destined to bring disaster. When she's born, the sacred Black Rose vanishes, marking her as the one. Rejected by her parents, she seeks her mysterious mate, the key to breaking the curse. With her parents gone, she navigates a treacherous path, protecting her siblings and the world from impending darkness. Will she conquer her destiny and save the world, or succumb to the curse, plunging all into chaos? Embark on this epic journey of fate, courage, and love, where the magical and the real collide, and the heart's strength is tested.

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Lora_Novels
Lora_NovelsLv1Lora_Novels

Indeed the world development is great. The way whole world is built is quite interesting but the characters do need some work with their dialogues. Just polish the story a bit more and this can become a great novel. Good luck.

Rainandstorm
RainandstormLv2Rainandstorm

I really do love and enjoy reading the novel, cause It really interesting .. But with what I had noticed, the structure as well as how you distinguish the characters needs some fixing to do... But overall, apart from all that, I really think that your book is amazing

Zhoa_Fei
Zhoa_FeiLv13Zhoa_Fei

Upon reading this story, I would notice that the main thing holding this story back is its organization and its structure. I believe that this story could have started better with the the introduction of the background of this newly crafted world. Though not everything should be divulged to the reader from the get go. Much of the information should be brought up and the futhered mentioned and expanded on in future chapters. The main character and associates background could have been handled better as well. Some of the characters could have been introduced in a different way and thus solidified the reader's recognition of them. Structure wise, there are a plethora of just open spaces peppered throughout the chapters. Most of them are incredibly unnecessary, so I recommend looking over and reviewing them. I also recommend using a different method to distinguish the characters in their dialogue. There is a story to be told here, you had 53 chapters, so that shows. Cleaning up the story would properly elevate it to another level. At this current iteration, a 3.6 rating would be fitting. World Building saves this one.

Mishal_Mishi
Mishal_Mishi作者Mishal_Mishi

it is good story. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 A best fantasy story. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰It is really interesting. I love the fantasy.

Naz_Gul_6262
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It is a great fantasy . The story is really great . And I wish I could be in this fantasyland as well . I am looking forward to it's updates.

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