System's POV

I don't want to brag, but let me start bragging right now. This, ladies, and gents, is one of the most, if not the most amazing novel that you will read this year. I won't say anything else because this refined, elegant, and charismatic author, is bound to give you another epic tale, which would make you fall in love with reading novels, all over again.

A true gem among gems. At first, I was not planning to read it because of the harem tag, but I'm glad that I did. The story is fun and easy to read, and the humor in the latest chapters makes me clutch my stomach each time I read them. Overall it's a great story that makes me look forward to more updates

I've read the first 154 chapters , and here's what I think: Right now, I don't have any criticisms to dedicate to this novel, because in my opinion, it's proceeding at a good pace that doesn't easily bore the reader. There are small hints of inspiration from other novels, but they are small enough to overlook. The main character is intelligent and interesting, as are the side characters of the novel. The plot is interesting and quite unique in its genre. Also, regarding the world-building, for this number of chapters, I would say it's quite good.In conclusion: it's a novel worth spending time on, and it's good enough for me to spend some money to read the private chapters (which honestly I've only done with just 2 novels so far).P.S. Of course, I don't expect everyone to agree with me on the points listed above, as it is also a matter of taste.

yup that's another great book by elyon can't wait for more chapters... TO ALL THE READERS : this is an elyon fan readers who read/is reading his all books form completed to the ones in progress and i promise you won't be disappointed in any of his works !!! try his novels and enter -- yuns

It’s elyon what do you expect? Obviously 5 stars, best author on webnovel. If you don’t read you are missing out, as his works are all amazing be it wwi, rwtss or heavens gate they are all amazing and ely’s novels are becoming better and better. So yuh it’s a must read.

One more novel to the Favourites! I started reading novels from 'Reincarnated With The Strongest System', and man that's the best decision I have made at that time. There are lots, I mean lots of system novels here, not all are bad and I don't want to bad mouth any authors out there in the universe-but anyways It's a Very good one(Except 47 Wives), and the 'Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate'-- Man, oh man,, Mind blowing masterpiece!! Absolutely Love it-No words were needed!! And Now, Here we go with 'System's POV'-- Just looking at the title, there is an urge to read all chapters at once. Another Long journey to the 'Ely-verse'-- Let's go baby!!(Ahem, I mean Reader) Thanks a bunch, Elyon-sensei!!

Mixed feelings about this novel. It should be good, as the premise should be interesting, but it’s not (for me). I just can’t take the story seriously. Too many immersion breaks, too many „basic“ jokes, like tf is a “copyright god” and the “mafia boys”. Weird language sometimes, like you read in a instagram section. You feel like a 10th grader wrote this sometimes. The villains are two-dimensional, like always the monarchs and gods are stupid and only the MC came up with the most basic of solution and that makes him a genius. You just can’t feel anything for the characters.

It’s an enjoyable story, but has some very questionable logic “He had been to many worlds where slavery was rampant, so he didn't think of the Slave Traders as bad guys. In fact, one of his Hosts was also a Slave Trader, who sold slaves to people, whom he believed would take good care of them. There were always two sides of a coin. Depending on how one looked at it, there were many stories where slaves actually had a happy ending, and found joy despite the circumstances they were in.” As it turns out, when I beat someone half to death, and poisoned them for a year, that person was quite thankful when I decided to let them sit at the dinner table instead of the prison filled with glass shards…perhaps the system has never heard of the terms Stockholm syndrome and suspension bridge effect. This has been thirteen’s largest character defect in my opinion

Although the book is in it's starting phase, I am loving it. Also, Author I have read all of your books and a big fan of them

One word 'PERFECT' I just can't think of anything else . After RWTSS and the strongest necromancer novel it's my third read from Elyon and I am utterly satisfied . SPOILER AHEAD ********* It was fun knowing elyon's opinion of heroes , villains , cannon fodders and extras through this novel . MC doesn't hate heroes as he knows realistically it's fate at fault and he just is devastated how he had to lose his loved ones because of them not possessing the same cheat of a power . The part where Roland confronts Zion after his defeat was a very delicate part and I was totally scared of what is to happen next but as I've read it farther I am not that sad at the end of the day he and Roland can't stay under the same roof . But still would love to see Stella as his 4th harem member . Kekeke Please write a novel on sun-wu-kong's rise alongside thirteen , really wanna see it , Keep up this saga bro .

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The novel itself seems well written. Only concerns are a few things a commentator named slyeye brought up. For example, how the mother talks like kids can't be normal anymore but they weren't alive 300 years ago, so life like this should be normal to them. It feels like a lot of modern thoughts are still being used without considering how people in this world would think, not really what they would, but how and why. Alternatively, this novel was not what I was looking for either. I thought it was going to be directly in the POV of a system as a system, rather then a system in a players body with lets be honest, a system. If it changes, then feel free to comment the chapter it does so I can skip to that because that's what I was looking for and if you know a novel that does that, please say so.

I've been following Elyon since RWTSS and he hasn't disappointed his readers even once since then. The Strongest Necromancer of Heaven's Gate, Strongest Warlock and now this one are all freaking masterpieces. I was very intrigued and excited when I read the synopsis that a System will be the mc this time. It's just a breath of fresh air and absolutely brilliant. You won't find a problem with the writing quality or his updating stability. The characters are extremely well written and are in no way one dimensional. The world building is incredible as always. I think unless you don't read his works, you will not be able to appreciate the sheer amount of thought, care, love and hard work our beloved author has put in every damn time. Now stop reading my review and go read the novel lol. P.S. Elyon bro, please create a discord server for us readers to engage.

I love how you will never ever find a 2 or 3 star review in any of Elyons novel. While master class novels like shadow slave and Lord of myserties also have dozens of bad review, but not in any of Elyons novel through some "Miracle"

I was expecting more. The story isn't progressing in an exciting direction so far. The MC has too few challenging obsticles in his path for the theme. The drive behind the main character is very tacky. I find the MC’s interactions with the main antagonists to be immature and cringeworthy(maybe it should be like that if he's an inexperienced kid, but I don't like the time-hardened system acting like that). The intrinsic logic behind the narration is often immature. There is a lot of rushing through infodump after infodump, which leaves events and characters of the story feeling trivial and impersonal. In many scenes, the writing style lacks sufficient description and immersiveness. Don't get it wrong, it’s not a terrible read, just not great. To sum it up, it's readable and feels original, but it could and should be so much better.

A decent take on what it would be like for a system to be the main character, instead of a supporting actor. Although, the story felt rushed and too monotone, unforgiving with the lack of emotions present.

There's nothing to see here, its just an Elyon fan leaving behind his 5 star review.And people should read this novel cause a system as MC is something new since all systems are meant to help MC grow stronger.

Masterpiece One of Elyon's best novels, if not the best yet The story writing is excellent and the characters are well developed. We are captivated in every chapter by the storyline like all his works of art (rwtss, snihg, etc). If you're reading this I'd like to thank you very much for all your work and I hope you will continue to write new story's after you've finished writing System POV and the strongest warlock

As over-powered MC's go, this is brilliantly written and shows the gradual increase in power without making it unbelievable.

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