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NitrogenousBeing

NitrogenousBeing

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My favorite novels on webnovel.com 1 My own novel. 2 Release that witch 3 Shadow Slave 4 Lord of the Mysteries 5 In another world with the crafting system 6 Loosing money to be a tycoon

2018-05-16 入りましたUnited States
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ライティング

902.1h

読書の

635

本を読む

バッジ
26
瞬間
236
  • NitrogenousBeing
    NitrogenousBeing16 hours ago
    に返信 Phil_Living

    Absolutely! Monetary support and positive referrals are the preferred die-hard fan behaviors.

  • NitrogenousBeing
    NitrogenousBeing2 days ago
    に返信 NanaiSensei

    You're so fast!

  • NitrogenousBeing
    NitrogenousBeing2 days ago
    コメント

    Is “olympeon” a typo, or a pun? I've never seen this spelling before.

  • NitrogenousBeing
    NitrogenousBeing4 days ago
    発表

    It's an entertaining and well-written story. I knew nothing about K-pop or idles and I was fine. Worth a read. Criticism: Some middle and ending parts of the story are a little too dragged out. Initially it was hard to reconcile the MCs backstory with some of his actions and character, but if the reader can get past the initial hiccups it solidifies. It's hard to get a feel for the rhythm of the songs in text form, but that's not the author's fault. The portrayal of LA struck me as a bit odd as I’m familiar with it. The last minor gripe is everyone gets mesmerized by MC too easily near the end. (I guess he's just that otherworldly?) Try it its good.

  • NitrogenousBeing
    NitrogenousBeing4 days ago
    に返信 Six3

    I'll tell you why I agree with the reviewer: It lacks real conflict, and every character sounds the same like it’s being roleplayed by one person who’s never seen conflicting opinions and is only there to serve and praise the MCs. It’s only held up by its somewhat mysterious setting, pleasant tone with monotonous wit, and constant slow and detailed progression in power for the MCs. Admittedly it does those things well, but is a woefully incomplete and hollow package. It’s a bit like the rambling daydream of a narcissist. It is surface-level charming without sufficient substance.

  • NitrogenousBeing
    NitrogenousBeing4 days ago
    に返信 NitrogenousBeing

    Have a good remainder of your vacation then. PS. "Die-hard fan" is referring to those who protest against my review. You are the first, thus "at least one." Die-hard fans tend to adopt "us vs them" mentalities and treat those with conflicting opinions like fated enemies.

  • NitrogenousBeing
    NitrogenousBeing8 days ago
    に返信 Zepher_Catch

    Maybe proofread before posting? The purpose of the warning was to persuade biased persons to not take unnecessary offense at the constructive criticism. I was pretty nice about it. At the time of review, there weren't many chapters released. Besides, I’d read all the free chapters available. It wasn’t good enough for me to wait or pay for more. If everyone followed your suggestion, no subpar contracted or incomplete book could be reviewed. Frankly, it doesn't make much sense. However, I am happy that you found enjoyment where I could not. The author has at least one die-hard fan in you.

  • NitrogenousBeing
    NitrogenousBeing19 days ago
    コメント

    This novel is better than the bronze

  • NitrogenousBeing
    NitrogenousBeinga month ago
    コメント

    Hmm the chapter number seems to be one number less.

  • NitrogenousBeing
    NitrogenousBeinga month ago
    コメント

    lol I was wondering why it was dumpy lol nice