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Reborn as naruto with system

作者: jojojo66
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WebNovel で公開されている、jojojo66 の作者が書いた Reborn as naruto with system の小説を読んでください。A soul will be reincarnated as naruto. The timeline will be 2 years before Shippuden when naruto went out with jiraya for training.This will be wish-fulfilling fan fic.[Hituas]...

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A soul will be reincarnated as naruto. The timeline will be 2 years before Shippuden when naruto went out with jiraya for training. This will be wish-fulfilling fan fic. [Hituas]

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Odd One In

They say being a rich person is very easy, you can get whatever you want and you will happy for the rest of your life without facing any problems but that was not the case for Salish Kim, who constantly faced betrayals and back attacks mostly from those, whom she trusted more than herself. This is a story of a twenty-year-old girl, Salish Kim, whose life awaits a series of unexpected yet wonderful disastrous adventures coming up for her. She was dared to play one of the scariest paranormal games called “The Elevator Game” by her best friend who actually turned out to be her toxic bully and upon her dare, Salish wanted to complete the given task because it was special for her, it was given by her one and only best friend of eight years or that’s what she thought. Salish was still an extremely smart girl but an introvert. Her guts told her not to do it but her mind said something else. She decided to play the game on the tenth anniversary of father passing away to distract herself from the pain, sorrow and the worst memories which one would never want to remember again. Her life wasn’t easy at any point. Having a wealthy father who left behind the biggest of his treasures for his one and only biological daughter and encountering her own relatives who only wanted her father’s money, and these relatives also include her own mother, Aunt, Cousins, Uncles, Stepfather and his two sons. Salish never got the love she deserved, the support she needed and the care and love she craved for after the death of her father. Although, she had learnt to be Strong when needed and smart where needed she was still a ten-year-old child by heart stuck in the body and mind of a mature lady of twenty. Salish thought her day would be as normal as ever because she never believed in things such as parallel universe or theories saying that ghosts watch you when you sleep. But little did she know that all her ghost dreams which she saw every night, of a man in black suit and pale skin searching for her was soon to become a reality and she would open up the gate for herself to enter another world. A world far away from her home. A world from which, she could maybe never return. A world of the heavenly cruelty of afterlife, a world where the dead come alive. A world of nightmares, a world of vengeance. And just like that, Salish Kim took the challenge to survive. To survive a remote world with zero knowledge about her newly formed surroundings. A world of magic, a world of power where one’s blood define someone. Her species were obliviously odd one out for the residents of those planet but because of her, being the first ever person to enter that world of nothing, made her the Odd One In. Leaving her life in the hands of faith she takes a small step ahead and embarks on her journey and she comes across many familiar faces who died a long time ago and then it clicked her……. “I-I am… in another universe? No, no, no! it can never happen! It’s a lie, it’s all a lie!!” she says just before she realizes, she was completely drenched in a water like substance and darkness consumed her. She fell in the arms of someone and just then, “Stay away from that girl! It’s the king’s order!” Shouted a solider. “But who is she? Why is she so small? And-” The man who held her in his arms was shushed by the solider. “She is the king’s daughter” Said the solider. To be continued.

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jojojo66
jojojo66作者jojojo66

The SHAMELESS author here..... 1. First few chapters have many grammatical errors. But it will get good in later chapters 2. At least read 20chap before giving a review :3 3. English is not my first language. so there can be many small mistakes. If you can avoid those mistakes then give this fanfic a chance -.-

RandomSwordsThief
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Mah. Branding it as wish fulfillment would be considered an understatement. The MC can buy skills and bloodlines from the system, and gift them to his loved ones. Not my cup of tea.

Kono_Timoda
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Current chapter: 29 Yeah, author come here. Get closer. Closer, *whispers* why did you give a logia devil fruit TO A WORLD THAT HAS NO HAKI!! You probably know this but the MC should literally be untouchable, but not to worry you could have overcome this issue with good execution, great dialog and interesting character integrations, but man, you are bad. Tips: See and don't tell - you don't have to narrate everything the person is doing For lemon scene - too many pronouns, use complex and compound sentences. use descriptive language, disturb how the persons feel physically and emotionally. Don't rush - making love should be passionate, not h*ntai. Pro tip: describe the little things, the little details that shows that the person cares. You passing is too fast in my book, and it doesn't feel like I am reading a gurney, instead I feel like I am reading ideas out of someone's head as they come up with what to say. Last tip: if you have novels that you think are expertly executed and you enjoy the character interaction, the power scaling, they do the fight scenes, the setting, immersion etc. read it again and analyze it. so how he does the dialogs, what does he make the MC say vs what he feels, how does he scribe what the MC is seeing or feeling and the list goes on. Its a lot of work but if you want to get good, you need to do all that. No getting around it.

Febfew
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mth_01
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a promising fan fic I hope author writes more I can see great potential here, well at least it's fun reading ................................

Daoista7SJC8
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Ezzaldien_s
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More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More

Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeererreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeererreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeererreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

_GoldenKing_
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This is really promising! I look forward to the full story 'till the end and without the author dropping it! .

Jordi_Hardiansyah
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ANANTA
ANANTALv4ANANTA

No need to write anything for it's good!

DaoistQIwzjb
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Bien....muy buen trabajo y si empezamos medio flojo. ..pero ahora se siente bieeen....se parece un poco al trio de MC mejore de los fics..akira...lee

Arc_Dragon
Arc_DragonLv11Arc_Dragon

Its Good but problem I have is MC shpuld have trained more and also May be training Arc a bit interesting,I understand changimg stpry so why not do that train fully and then come back or may be use shadow clones yraining as cliche you know wish fullfillment amd all but Its not my complaint ,Its enjoyable anyways althpugh I prefer Little more fun

Uzumaki_Kushina_21
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i hope you won't drop it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Stud222
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david_cuenca
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esto parece bueno , me gusta la linia del tiempo en donde comienza la novela , ya que no me gusta que comience desdé pequeño, además es harén y está Tsunade jeje

Savitar_12
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can't wait for the next chapter ............................................................................................................

Ash_Crushade
Ash_CrushadeLv1Ash_Crushade

it's the best bruh . I wanna see the harem so badly. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. There should be some interesting stories. And you have to save Itachi.

DEAD_SOHT
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More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More

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