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I'm rereading. I'm going to delete my review and make another one.
This fanfic had enormous potential, but the author threw it away because of numerous errors in chronology, powers and character construction. I was really looking forward to reading this fanfic, I waited for 1 month or more to read it and I kept checking the number of chapters and reviews during that time. I actually waited longer, not bizarre mistakes. The more chapters I read, the more disappointed I become.
Just 3 things to say: 1° congratulations to the translator. 2° the author of this fanfic is mentally ill with 100% certainty. 3° if this fanfic is at the top of power stones it must be out of sympathy for the translator, I refuse to believe that so many people like this thing.
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This Kagami seems very strange to me. Too nervous emo to be able to be Tobirama's guard, who hated this kind of emo Uchiha.
Hey, Kagami was supposed to be 41~47 years old in the 2nd ninja war, although I seriously doubt he was even alive then.
If I'm not mistaken Kagami died in the 1st war. There is no mention of him in the 2nd ninja war, which took place 20 years after the 1st.
Harem please...
I have a few questions before I start reading. 1st: Does MC have Susanoo? 2nd: Will MC have EMS or Rinnegan in the future? 3rd: Are the verses/worlds that the MC is entering open for him to access whenever he wants or is it temporary? And if it is permanent, is there a time difference between the verses? Example: every 1 year that passes in Naruto is 2/5 in AOT/DC where the MC is. (translator)
I have a few questions before I start reading. 1st: Does MC have Susanoo? 2nd: Will MC have EMS or Rinnegan in the future? 3rd: Are the verses/worlds that the MC is entering open for him to access whenever he wants or is it temporary? And if it is permanent, is there a time difference between the verses? Example: every 1 year that passes in Naruto is 2/5 in AOT/DC where the MC is. 4th: will the MC have a romantic partner or will he have a harem? (translator)