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RandomSwordsThief
RandomSwordsThiefLv132yr
2022-07-28 02:12

Mah. Branding it as wish fulfillment would be considered an understatement. The MC can buy skills and bloodlines from the system, and gift them to his loved ones. Not my cup of tea.

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jojojo66
jojojo66Author

HEY, thnx for you review. Mc can gift his loved ones only after completing the mission .

RandomSwordsThief
RandomSwordsThiefLv13

I still don't like it. lol. Others might, though. The most important thing is doing what you feel best. Otherwise, you will end up losing interest and dropping the story.

jojojo66:HEY, thnx for you review. Mc can gift his loved ones only after completing the mission .
BestNero
BestNeroLv14

Kudos to you for being so positive. Most are super toxic.

RandomSwordsThief:I still don't like it. lol. Others might, though. The most important thing is doing what you feel best. Otherwise, you will end up losing interest and dropping the story.
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Saad_Yousuf
Saad_YousufLv4

I absolutely hate the idea. just saying it. You know that giving is not the best idea.

Itachi_ucchiha
Itachi_ucchihaLv1

well you definitely can't beat otustuki alone.So giving the power up to his close one is not bad.

Saad_Yousuf:I absolutely hate the idea. just saying it. You know that giving is not the best idea.
Saad_Yousuf
Saad_YousufLv4

Well defeating otsuski is not that hard. Plus how do you think increasing the power of people around naruto will. Even characters like pain would or could be squashed liked bug there will be no struggle and every one will be super op kind of like multi millionaire purposely living in village and showing of their money. it's a lame idea.

Itachi_ucchiha:well you definitely can't beat otustuki alone.So giving the power up to his close one is not bad.
Itachi_ucchiha
Itachi_ucchihaLv1

defeating them not hard? oh boy you living in a false world ain't you. Author says loved one so is basically means mc wife or the people who will be in harem.if the author stick to his, word then it will five people, who hace the strenght to fight otsuki.

Saad_Yousuf:Well defeating otsuski is not that hard. Plus how do you think increasing the power of people around naruto will. Even characters like pain would or could be squashed liked bug there will be no struggle and every one will be super op kind of like multi millionaire purposely living in village and showing of their money. it's a lame idea.
Saad_Yousuf
Saad_YousufLv4

Are you or Author's alternate account? You don't have to really defeat otsuski. You can just not let the Akatsuki live and boom otsuski will still be sealed or you can just kill zetsu and as for giving power up to his loved ones. If he only gave it to his harems I would look down on him more because it would make him look like a Mc who literally stands in the line of " If you are not a hoe get you a** up because you are not getting the power up from me though." And do you ducking realize how easy it would be for them to deal with villains and how worth less the villains will seem. they would seem like ants.

Itachi_ucchiha:defeating them not hard? oh boy you living in a false world ain't you. Author says loved one so is basically means mc wife or the people who will be in harem.if the author stick to his, word then it will five people, who hace the strenght to fight otsuki.
Itachi_ucchiha
Itachi_ucchihaLv1

No,I am not author.I am just here for reading comments see if the story is good or not.lol.After chap 4 I didn't read beacuse of so much cringe. Well for the part you say if he give power to only his family it's basically mention in the first chap.

Saad_Yousuf:Are you or Author's alternate account? You don't have to really defeat otsuski. You can just not let the Akatsuki live and boom otsuski will still be sealed or you can just kill zetsu and as for giving power up to his loved ones. If he only gave it to his harems I would look down on him more because it would make him look like a Mc who literally stands in the line of " If you are not a hoe get you a** up because you are not getting the power up from me though." And do you ducking realize how easy it would be for them to deal with villains and how worth less the villains will seem. they would seem like ants.
NatsuTempest
NatsuTempestLv4

this review saved me from wasting time I have never liked it when the mc can give people abilities or bloodlines to me it also makes it seem like of mc has this well let's see how many more chapters till everyone has that because of mc

LORD_sKY
LORD_sKYLv1

Check out Naruto: Time Manipulation yes I'm the author and I have no shame in promoting it

G1LGAMESH
G1LGAMESHLv14

Can't beat the white aliens alone? I think you're forgetting mc system have a store function and as stated earlier, he can buy bloodlines. And let's not talk about the fact that this is a wish fulfillment fanfic.

Itachi_ucchiha:well you definitely can't beat otustuki alone.So giving the power up to his close one is not bad.
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