Protagonist Killer

I dont wanna sound direspectfull but i know this novel will get dropped but i aint gonna this is a pretty good book so dont drop it even tho you will some day

my honest opinion on the novel, please don't be offended: The first chapters in the hollow world was a good thing, but when we arrived in the human world everything changed for the worse (at least for me) I know that they do not receive money for this work and they do it just for fun, but wanting to write about some characters like yoruichi or kisuke without even having consideration for their basic personality and forcing a plot so simple that it does not express some love for writing makes the quality of the novel drop very low, I know that in webnovel there are not many good novels, but you The idea is really good, if it had been different you could have had a lot of support I think. Thank you

It was actually pretty darn good for the first couple dozen chapters, albeit a bit silly at times. But after a cetain point it all devolved into bland smut and two dimensional pointless villainy with no real goal and endless repetition. Still, I highly recommend reading the first thirty chapters or so, then deciding for yourself if you want to read the rest or not.

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It is very interesting, the truth is, I like how the main character is, I also like that I have the mission to kill ichigo that makes it more interesting and less cliché, it would also be good if

as many reviewers have stated before me the first half of the chapters are brutaly good (my opinion) and had potential to be one of the best fanfics on this site, the thing that changed my view was the lemon part of the story, don't get me wrong I'm a lemon lover like most readers here but in this case, at least for me, it worsened the story, many characters feel fake, as if they were automated s-exdolls with powers, I still read it but I have to admit that I will surely drop the moment the mc's objetive in bleach dies, I made this review with my personal opinion and preferences in mind so give it a try you might like it (especially if you love op battlejukie and extremely lusty mc's)also thanks to the author for making it.

Yo guys i will warn you in advance... MC is idiotic and it hurts like a bitch to read it sometimes so beware :D It's readable but not really good. Peace OUT !

I don't really know how to feel about this fanfic. It is good for the most part, but a lot of the story feels extremely forced. WQ - Few grammar errors. SoU - Frequent updates so far. SD - Decent but it is being sort of rushed. CD - The MC is a bland OP hollow and needs some more development. WB - Decent so far, it is following canon bleach, so nothing wrong here. Overall it is a decent fanfic if you don't mind the forced parts of the story. 3.8 stars.

Okay the story was okay, the prospects were so high but it was when the MC went into the human world where things took a deep dive. The characters feel one-sided, and the women have little to no development. The smut is excessive, and sometimes annoying. It had the chance to be better, seeing as how the term protagonist doesn't entirely mean hero. Overall, it was good, until the MC started to act like a horndog. I'll still be reading it since the author might listen to me but what do I know?

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the story is interesting i just think he's doing to much.especially the chosen thing where they have to fight it's boring and there's barelly anything about the anime

Honestly, I think I received an aneurysm just from reading the first paragraph. The MC fights another Adjucha and wins even though he was just a newly evolved one with all his abilities locked, like I swear there was a least a few chapters of content that just disappeared.

I love fanfics that have to do with with this main character. please keep going there's two few of these out there.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The sentences Is readable, but the grammar is not superb. I don't know what you expected its fan fiction there's no editors or nothing so i don't really mind the bad grammar. What I do mind however is making the characters OOC to meeting specific agendas for the author. No. The author made relationships with other characters feel forced. This basically follows canon so the world background isn't something to write home about. Anyways good luck writing author, but this wasn’t for me.

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This story is fun asf BUT makes no sense

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