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n this part, the System refers to itself as incapable of doing various things, which is not wrong. The one doing the majority of things so far is Arthur, who is managing and creating new things for the System that is incapable of doing most things on its own. Being an incomplete System, it doesn't even have minimal intelligence to "self-manage."
Ironically, this is a situation Arthur would love. Your comment has given me some possible ideas, so I appreciate it.
I will take your suggestion into consideration, thank you! I will see what I can do about the penalties in the upcoming chapters.
Ah, I see! Thank you for explaining and giving me that suggestion, I will take it into consideration when writing the future chapters.
So far, I don't have anyone in mind for his love interest. I've just decided that at some point in the story, there will be romance because I have a genuine desire to write something like that. I'm open to possible suggestions.
If I may ask, what do you mean by 'find a balance in your story'? I'm a bit lost about that part and I really didn't quite understand... but nonetheless, I appreciate your comment from the bottom of my heart.
I have some thoughts regarding the Gacha. I'm not against the idea of returning it to him as it was already part of some side plans, but it will likely take some time. After all, the Gacha system itself can already significantly enhance the character's strength at an extreme pace and that's not something I intend to do right now. Nevertheless, I will give your suggestion serious consideration.
The idea behind this class was supposed to be a Samurai, since the Warrior class already covers the other aspect of using more diversified swords. I believe I may have conveyed the wrong idea about this class considering the name I gave it.
I believe that so far the situation that happened with him rarely occurred with other System Users. I mean, yes, they all 'died' and received their Systems in different ways but most of them always followed a similar path until reaching the part of the System. And when it came to choices, there wasn't much diversity there considering that many works chose [Human], [Angel], [Vampire], and various other races. Now that I'm reading what I've posted I must admit that I included this sentence from Arthur too early considering it's the first official chapter.
I have some expectations for the writing in this work, as I have been greatly inspired by certain things in recent days. My primary language is definitely not the language used to write this work, so there may (and probably will) be errors in the writing, but I believe it is still readable to a certain extent. Some native words from where the story is set will not be translated, to make it simpler to understand and remember the setting of the story. If you have any questions about the work, feel free to ask in the chapter or in this message, and I should be able to respond as long as it's not something that will give away extreme spoilers about the future of the story.