Naruto: The Medical Shinobi

This novel is great! Although the ‘intro’ before the reincarnation takes place is a bit long, it is detailed and sets the stage for the story really well. The MC is likable and the direction the story is going with is intriguing. As of now, the story hasn’t progressed far but still, I’m hooked. Keep up the good work!

Slow but still enjoyable. The powers are unique and character is well defined. Loved the Fujin reference from The wind calamity. The author is clearly new to writing and has long way to go. But still very good start.

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full of shit full of cringe full of bullshit. 13 ch in and it is still day 1 of being reincarnated .every single instance, every signal paragraph doesn't make any sense .the Mc is cipletly and utterly hopeless moron. the writer has a masochist knack .the story is so childish it make the filler chapter at the Start of Naruto very serious .it like the writer is trying to write a horror story for 5 year old children.🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

Ahhg they are going in circles asking the same question but using different tones and sentences please Make! it! Stop!!!. It took me a while to reach a conclusion that skipping 3-6 won't make much of a difference and I Was Right!!!

It is well-written and the unique and well-researched abilities make it refreshing from the repetitive uchiha/senju OC you normally see. It makes me feel like there is a strong foundation for development with limitless potential, especially if you get creative. interested to see where it goes. I would say however that the beginning before the reincarnation is unnecessarily long and would most likely put some people off so it may be worth editing it and trimming it down in my opinion. A more relevant image and detailed synopsis would also go a long way 🫡 keep up the good work Mr Author

Author I get the starting is a bit slow and everything. But you have to understand, in this platform the first few chapters are the deciding factor to continue or not. He is an adult before dying, so his mentality at the beginning of his transmigration seems a little childish. Maybe previous memories might affect them but still he has many mind related perks, so it should be controllable. He is a scientist so making his character more logical and calculating type won't change the course. Overall a good story, intriguing but need to read further to get interesting. Hope you all the best Author.

Muy buena novela, sigue así autor 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋❤️

The story is good and has potential but I think he's a little naive he was thrust into the spotlight too early, with no strength to defend himself. I hope he does business with the Daimyō to protect himself and make money from his inventions. By the way, this photo is not pretty

It's a good idea, the bases are well written, I can't say yet that it's a good story because it's still at the bases (Chapter 35), it has a different idea than what I'm used to and that's good. It has a future and I hope it's not abandoned. The only "failed " is that it is slow-paced, which is not bad in itself, but eventually almost all slow-paced stories are abandoned because the author lost motivation, so it is not a criticism but more of a fear.

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A Great start and story. Looking forward for new chapters.

An interesting story as of yet can’t wait to see where it goes