This novel is great! Although the ‘intro’ before the reincarnation takes place is a bit long, it is detailed and sets the stage for the story really well. The MC is likable and the direction the story is going with is intriguing. As of now, the story hasn’t progressed far but still, I’m hooked. Keep up the good work!

Slow but still enjoyable. The powers are unique and character is well defined. Loved the Fujin reference from The wind calamity. The author is clearly new to writing and has long way to go. But still very good start.

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full of shit full of cringe full of bullshit. 13 ch in and it is still day 1 of being reincarnated .every single instance, every signal paragraph doesn't make any sense .the Mc is cipletly and utterly hopeless moron. the writer has a masochist knack .the story is so childish it make the filler chapter at the Start of Naruto very serious .it like the writer is trying to write a horror story for 5 year old children.🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

Ahhg they are going in circles asking the same question but using different tones and sentences please Make! it! Stop!!!. It took me a while to reach a conclusion that skipping 3-6 won't make much of a difference and I Was Right!!!

It is well-written and the unique and well-researched abilities make it refreshing from the repetitive uchiha/senju OC you normally see. It makes me feel like there is a strong foundation for development with limitless potential, especially if you get creative. interested to see where it goes. I would say however that the beginning before the reincarnation is unnecessarily long and would most likely put some people off so it may be worth editing it and trimming it down in my opinion. A more relevant image and detailed synopsis would also go a long way 🫡 keep up the good work Mr Author

with this story pace you will burn out pretty fast! too much water. you know Naruto, he knows naruto, we knows naruto so you can just skip most unnecessary explanations. at this pace if you ever try to finish this work it will take trice more chapters than original work. too dramatic without any movement.

Muy buena novela, sigue así autor 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋❤️

The story is good and has potential but I think he's a little naive he was thrust into the spotlight too early, with no strength to defend himself. I hope he does business with the Daimyō to protect himself and make money from his inventions. By the way, this photo is not pretty