Glebby_Boi

At first, I was a little sceptical about the direction the novel was going with after reading the synopsis. Although I’ve only read a few chapters, I can safely say that I was wrong to judge the book by its cover. The story flows smoothly and interactions between the MC and the rest of the cast are nicely done. The MC is still on the road towards being OP af, but it’s done seamlessly and gradually (although the rate at which it happens is still steep, considering the OP tag). Overall, it’s a nice read and I’m looking forward to reading the rest of the fic))

Thank you for the vote of confidence. I hope that this work meets your expectations)) Let me know if there is anything missing or needs further improvement down the line.

Unfortunately, to have the confidence make any quality changes to the original fic, I would need to complete reading it first. I am doing this rewrite whilst reading through it. So all the chapters posted are technically showing my progression in real-time. Any new changes to the fic are something I believe I should consider after completing the story. As I said before in my review, I am just trying to polish the novel as I read through it for a more comfortable reading experience for everyone else. Nothing more, nothing less. If you have any comments on the quality of the editing, however, it would be massively helpful))

Could be the original “One Piece: Gambling to the Top” fic by Blazuki. It’s been complete for a couple of years, so it’s not surprising if you’ve stumbled upon it some time ago.

Thanks for the chapter author. If you’re reading this, don’t be discouraged by the minor setbacks. The story is interesting enough to pull more people in. Besides, your editing and quality of writing will consolidate that))

What a great story!! Even the small mistakes don’t deminish the enjoyable and engaging quality of the ff. The best way to describe it would be controlled chaos. It has great potential to be one of the best one piece fics out there! Keep up the good work author!!

Thanks for thw encouragement!))

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Thank you! I’m glad to hear that you find the rewrite acceptable so far)) Seeing that you hold the OG fic in high regard, I’m excited to continue reading and posting the rest of the story.

I assume it’s referring to a contraceptive pill (ie Plan B and Morning-After pill)