Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)

I forgot to do my review so here it is one month later, I will try to be objective. My writing quality is good enough to be easily read and usually with the least grammar error possible but I am not competent enough to embellish every paragraph. My update stability isn't one chapter per day but I said at LEAST 1 each week and for now, I didn't fail it. For now, I'm happy about the story development I made, not much more to say here or it would be spoil. I honestly think I suck in terms of character design, I have a hard time doing great descriptions of peoples. And for world background well... it is not coming from my head but from Kishimoto’s right now but when I add things I try to make them faithful. I try to explain my choices in due times to not make you confused, and I usually show images of things I talk about that aren't in the original (like weapons or other things...) Hope you will enjoy it!

Great book hope you don't drop author pls. hope to get tsunade kaguya and konan in the harem of the mc. also will he stop the destruction of uzushiogakure from the attack or nah? also (٥↼_↼) you know... but she prolly young for him right? 😭

The MC is born the same year as the sannins, waifu tsunade and sephirot aspect. With that you are already in my favorites [img=update][img=update].

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Great story so far. The writing quality is top notch. I like the main character and his romantic relationship but i would appreciate more focus on their relationship as well as less time skips.

In general the novels okay, if you have something else to read you should but this isn't a total waste of time. More specifically it's full of especially cliche moments and characters (especially the mc who has every power ever) yet it does a good enough job of not throwing these problems in your face that you can learn to ignore them. Easily the worst part of the novel is the mc, the author makes him this "supah specul" chosen one with all the powers ever yet is also extremely weak whenever there a real confrontation to be had because logic or not the author wants a fight scene and weakens the mc to "make it interesting". It's one of the worst fanfic cliches to me, like if you're gonna have an OP mc at least commit to it, don't waffle, waffling is way worse. Still the work shines through in the character relationships, they're pretty good and they end up seeming fairly natural even if , again, they're not anything truly special.

It is far above the average naruto fanfiction, but still nothing impressive. There are quite a few better than this, but it far outshines the average ones. The writing quality is average, but the story makes up for it a bit. There are some grammatic issues, weird phrasing, awkward descriptions and the like, but it is still readable. The world background is developed a bit, but is still lacking. There are some issues with logic and inconsistency, as well as the lack of understanding the world. Some earth shaking changes made in the story have ZERO effect on the world. For example, Minato learned the Flying Raijin in less than a year. If it was so easy to master, the world would've been different. And this is just one of many. THE PLOT is ok, nothing spectacular, but has some original points. Characters are decent, but still have a lot of issues. The author somehow thinks that behaviour is genetic? WHAT? (Example with shisui) And ignores most of the changes the MC's presence would bring to the people. And now for the MC. He does actually think a bit, but not that much. He doesn't use his knowledge to his full advantage and just stays in Konoha being content. With his power, he could transform the world in years, create ways to grow at insane speeds, raise children to be powerhouses, revolutionize the education system, bring out new reforms, improve the lives of all, unite the world under one banner and so so so so so much more. Yet he stays in Konoha doing nothing. I know this is partly because of Madara, but it is still a bad excuse for lazy writing. The MC was stronger than Madara long ago, yet he for whatever reason persists his stupidity.

This novel is thoroughly enjoyable, very few authors can manage a Naruto fanfic set prior to Naruto's era without making serious errors and they tend to stick to canon, this one however does not and is quite refreshing in that sense, the character interactions are also fresh and believable. Overall I give it top marks.

This fanfic is underrated .. it has really good Writing and has a lot of potential and I can’t seem to get bored of it but the only downside that I have To point out is that it doesn’t have consistant chapter updates ... overall it’s a great book with great characters and fun story and i hope the author updates It more regularly

Grammar is good and the MC and his personality is great since he isn't a showoff just because he is strong and has godlike cheats...all i can say is keep up the good work and give us more!!!

Absolutely love the story kinda sad kushina is not in the harem but that is okay i guess. Nice job building up the relationship with Tsunade🥰

I like this fanfic soooo much that i want to time skip my self and binge watch till i had migrain and bloodshot eyes. And im quite surprised that there soo few reviews ,but i think this is just a hidden gem. and also PLZ DONT DROP THIS NOVEL PLZZZZ

_____________________)_(+_+)_(_________________________________ I like the way the author writes. Thanks to the author, one of the top 3 best fanfictions I have read of all time ______________________________________________________________

Отличный фанфик. Мне он нравится в целом, хотя не вижу в нем ничего нового или прорывного или оригинального. В целом очень хорошо и интересно.

Apakah muridnya akan mengambil rute Obito? Memang kondisi mereka cukup sama, diabaikan klan dll. Aku hanya penasaran pada plot yang akan dibangun, mengingat beberapa plot terjadi lebih dulu, Kiri dan Kumo berada dalam aliansi dan jika mengikuti kanon, Suna juga aliansi. Trio Sannin plus White Fang masih ada, pun tidak ada konflik Uchiha. Desa terlalu kondusif untuk konflik. Jika nantinya ada perjalanan melalui dunia. Aku mengusulkan untuk mencari novel Tiongkok populer dimana kultivasi itu ada. Jadi MC tidak akan bosan karena terlalu OP di dunia sebelumnya. Terimakasih untuk cerita yang luar biasa!

I like the story, the only bad thing I see is the update speed of the story. As for harem, I don't care much I hope it has a good character development. And that he doesn't start traveling from world to world without finishing Naruto's plot first.

I had to quit reading on the first chapter because of the stupid wishes making the character way too OP. I wanted to see some character development but with the way it has already begun , I can clearly see I won't get that. If you want wish fulfillment this is for you, however I don't suggest reading if you like a good character that develops over the course of the story.

a MC who only cares about the "friends" and family ... nicccce 😌 but did he kill the kids of the clan too? he could have erased their memories or something right?

This is easily one of the best natuto fanfic I’ve read, the mc is op but not like 5 year old mc fighting a kage kind of op so its entirely believable and the fanfic is written well, little mistakes here and there but it doesn’t take away the readability of the entire fanfic

▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆□□ -2☆ for harem ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆