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In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System

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WebNovel で公開されている、OneArmedImmortal の作者が書いた In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System の小説を読んでください。In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System.***Dr.Emery, a tech genius and a polymath, suddenly finds himself in a dangerous world, a fictional reality, dominated by Kaiju Monsters.Stemming...

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In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System. *** Dr.Emery, a tech genius and a polymath, suddenly finds himself in a dangerous world, a fictional reality, dominated by Kaiju Monsters. Stemming from a world that was constrained by the damnable laws of physics, how will he manage to survive in a world that didn't follow the norm by outrightly giving zero fuck about something like Square cube laws. Watch him bring his ingenuity to play and with the Ultimate Tech Resources System, he will dominate the Kaijus and Jaegers and eventually, the universe beyond. *** Tags - [MonsterVerse] [Pacific Rim] *** If you wish to support me, check out my Patreon for 15 advanced chapters: Patreon.com/MisterMushroom *** I own only the OCs. I don't own the image. All rights of production go to its creator. I found it at Pinterest. Here's the link - https://pin.it/72ngXAR I will be additionally posting my story on only Royalroad and ScribbleHub.

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THE CHOSEN CONSORT

Warning[Mature Contents] ‘’Poor girl,you fell on the most dangerous family ever’’ he said with serious expression April thought he was joking but looking at his expression he was not. ‘’You are in the presence of the 7 monsters sons of the king‘’ he said with a cold frightened smile . She looked at them and suddenly the color of their eyes changes. Each of them had different eyes colors. ‘’What’s that?!’’ She thought frightened He approaches her and wanted to touched her . Even though she was frightened she made an attempt to slap him but the man hold her hand brought her near him and said ‘’If you want to slap me then do it with your lips’’ he said with deep mesmerizing voice ,a smirk on his lips. After that her father has been held back by the most influential and cruel man in the village because he owed him a huge amount of money. April want to get her father out of that situation,even if she had to married one of the seven brother princes of the kingdom to have the required money and pay off her father’s debts. But rumors are circulating about the princes of the kingdom saying that they are cursed and possessed. Since she was a sceptic girl she didn’t believe in all those rumors.... Will she put up with her new husband and this new Life ?, will she support the true nature of the Envel family ?,will she succeed in getting her father out of the cruel man of her village . . Note of the author I’m a newbie..this is my first story. Please take note that English is not the first language of your author so don’t mind the mistakes. I will try and correct it. Any positive critic of the book will help me to improve ^^ The cover is not mine.

Isybebe · ファンタジー
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50 Chs

The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!

" I will love you far and beyond------ If there exists eternity, I'll be there right behind you. For if by your side I find myself then where else could I be without you... " ********* Excerpt: " Who are you? Why do you keep following me!" "...because it's you?" A certain shameless purple eyed stalker retorted. " Why are you leaching off here for? Find someone else! " "...because it's you!" the certain unashamed purple eyed leacher explained. " Aaaahhh! Get lost you pervert! " " Well how can I?...because it's y..." even before Wu Jun Jie could retort back with his shameless speeches, Jun Ai Nian had already taken out a knife to castrate him! ***** ° Who said only male leads have to be cold and all powerful? Nah...they could be subservient right? ° Who said a hero can't be a weakling?...Well, who won't like the idea of having a ML playing the role of a damsel in distress! ° Who said a male lead has to always stand atop general masses?... He could just be whiny little fellow that feels no shame in hiding behind his wife! Well, when you have --- A dominating female lead possessing a very ruthless and cruel heart, a person with multiple personality disorder (well not quite so), has a serious case of obsession with money over handsome hunks! A mischievous, cunning and covetous male lead who acts cute (only in front of fl), has a serious case of typical ML jealously syndrome, is black bellied but a docile and filial husband through and through! --- A novel such as this is possible! ********* Not every fantasy romance is unreal. For Love has never been a fantasy! Join in this fun filled sugery romance with a few fluffs here and a few thrills there with Jun Ai Nian and Wu Jun Jie whilst overcoming mysteries, schemes and thrills that lay in their paths.

_AiRen_ · ファンタジー
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31 Chs

The Tiger's Prime Minister

"Zhao Mingjiang, you will be my minister, won't you?" In the quiet turmoil of the powerful Zhu empire, Zhao Mingjiang carefully leads a nondescript life in the emperor's palace as a high scholar, reading old archives of war documented by generals and writing battle strategy theorems for his childhood friend, General Wen Huimo, who is away at the war front. But his peace is neither permanent nor steady. The king is growing elderly and frail, and the fight for the throne has become increasingly intense. Zhu Xiyan, crowned prince in name only, has taken much interest in Mingjiang's intelligence and the general that comes with Mingjiang's support. On the flip side, General Wen Huimo toils at war, rarely returning home and worrying about the situation in the capital. He has the men and the means, but even by the scarcely informative letters that Mingjiang sends him with increasing caution, he can tell that the pressure to perform the innocent subordinate for the royal family, especially the crowned prince, is becoming heavier in more ways than one. Beyond the palace walls too, the country is suffering under the gold plating, thousands of people toiling through droughts, and merchants becoming weary of the bandit-invested roads, problems that Mingjiang is only aware of because of Ouyang Qixing, a performer who travels easily in and out of the palace, who happens to be close friends to both Zhao Mingjiang and Wen Huimo. She's the only real connection to the outside, bringing news from informants nationwide. What the elderly emperor doesn't know, is that General Wen Huimo is gathering troops to overturn the current empire. The country is changing, and Mingjiang would be Wen Huimo's anchor inside the complex power struggle of the palace. —————————— · romance threads will happen (bl, 1v2, ? ending), but doesn't overtake the main plot · depictions of blood, violence, etc in later chapters · slow building story!

jynematryx · 歴史
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HIGH SCHOOL: THE SECTION 3B

Hindi mabubuo ang buhay ng walang high school life, Hindi ka tutungtong ng college nang hindi dumadaan sa high school, High school: In other term Middle School, Ito 'yong part ng buhay na pwede kang gumawa ng kalokohan hangga't kaya mo, Ito 'yong part ng buhay na mararamdaman mo lahat ng dapat maramdaman ng isang teen Kabilaan ang riot, bugbugan, bully-han, tawanan, asaran, pikonan. Hindi ka matatawag na high school student kung wala kang Squad, Team o kahit ano pang grupo 'yan. Sobrang saya sa part na ito. 'Yong tipong masasabi mo pang "Okay bagsak muna second grading" diba nakakatawa? Dito rin magkakaroon ka ng libo libong krass (crush) 'yon bang pati practice teacher niyo crush mo na rin (Hahaha) Crush sa kabilang section, Kabilang department, Kabilang bakod, Kabilang school, Kahit nga sa kabila mundo meron pa. (Including KPOPW, RPW, DW, WW) Minsan pag aagawan pa! Hayst. Pero sabi nga nila, Everything has its ending. 4years, 4years lang ang meron tayo na pwede nating gawin lahat ng bagay, 4years na pwede nating ipagsawalang-bahala ang grades natin, 4years na hihingi lang tayo ng hihingi ng baom sa magulang natin, 4years lang ang meron tayo para magpakasasa at magpakalunod sa kasiyahan. Babawiin rin yan ng isang araw na iyakan, Sa araw na may magsasabing "CONGRATULATIONS GRADUATES" Masarap sa pakiramdam, Masaya dahil natapos mo ang middle school, pero mabigat at malungkot dahil ito na rin ang pagtatapos ng kasiyahan sa buhay natin, Kumbaga ito na ang limitasyon natin bilang teens , tapos na kasiyahan, Umpisa na ng pag-iisa. For now on. All we need to do is, Seize every moment when we still in high school, Time is running and someday, This happiness will turned ito memories, a special memories _____________ WARNING: Please don't plagiarize my work, I know that this is lame but please respect my imagination. So ayon nga NO TO PLAGIARISM TAYO hihe. This story may contains Bad words (Like putangina) So if your mind are sensitive must ignore this. This story is a work of fiction, names of characters, events and time are fiction. Originated by my Imagination. If you could read Names, Places and etc. that similar to something or someone you know that exist, I'm sorry not sorry but i repeat My story was originated by my IMAGINATION

Sybintin · 若者
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코인 상장폐지~C M 9 9 1 점 컴

" '국내 정식 온라인 카지노 라이센스 업체 국내 가장 많은 VIP회원을 보유한 샌즈카지노 가장 신뢰할 수 있는 온라인 카지노사이트 정식 온라인 카지노는 우리계열 카지노뿐 샌즈카지노 【www. C M 9 9 1 .C O M】 NO.1 카지노 바카라게임의 자존심 >UHD급의 초고화질로 신선한 게임의 재미를 선사합니다 >세계가 인정하는 카지노 고퀄리티 서비스 .먹튀 검증완료 업체 .365일 24시간 전문 고객상담팀 운영 .카지노 가입률1위 / 재방문률1위 / 자본금1위!! .매주 색다른 이벤트 진행중!! 다양한 멀티 게임 제공!! #카지노사이트 #카지노게임 #카지노바카라사이트 #바카라 #바카라사이트 #샌즈카지노 #예스카지노후속 #더킹카지노 #퍼스트카지노 #우리카지노카지노사이트 #우리카지노계열 #샌즈카지노추천 #카지노 #제왕카지노 #카스뱃 #토토사이트 #메이저사이트 #안전놀이터 #안전사이트 #카지노총판 #파워볼 #꽁머니 #사설토토사이트 #먹튀검증 #네임드 #슈어맨 #먹튀폴리스 #올인구조대 #온카 #카지노톡 #카지노서울점 #카지노부산점 #카지노대구점 #카지노인천점 #카지노제주점 #라이브스코어 #스포츠토토 #프로토 #스포츠 #챔피언스리그 #축구토토승무패 #해외축구 #프리미어리그 #프로야구 #스포츠분석 #프로토당첨확인 #야구 #파라다이스카지노 #호텔카지노 #온라인카지노순위 #온라인카지노커뮤니티 #온라인카지노먹튀 #한국어온라인카지노 #안전카지노사이트 #온라인카지조작 #해외온라인카지노 #카지노검증사이트 #호텔카지노검증 #마카카지노호텔 #라스베가카지노호텔 #롯데호텔 #한국카지노위치 #한국카지노역사 #한국카지노현황 #한국카지노순위 #실시간바카라사이트 #인터넷바카라 #바카라검증사이트 #파칭코 #파친코 #신정카지노탐정 #홀덤 #텍사스홀덤사이트 #텍사스홀덤 #섰다 #온라인카지노 #온라인카지노사이트 #바둑이사이트 #한국카지노 #바카라추천사이트 #슬롯머신사이트 #카지노추천사이트 #우리카지노 #실제카지노사이트 #실제카지노 #스마트폰카지노 #온카지노 #룰렛사이트 #그래프게임 #라이브카지노 #온라인슬롯게임 #위커힐카지노 #인터넷카지노사이트 #정선카지노 #정통카지노 #카지노슬롯머신 #카지노종류 #카지노커뮤니티 #카지노게임사이트 #인터넷카지노 #나무위키카지노 #블랙잭 #더블업카지노 #라이브카지노사이트 #룰렛 #식보 #슬롯 #슬롯머신 #먹튀없는카지노사이트 #릴게임 #해외카지노사이트 #카지노사이트주소 #바카라그림보는법 #바카라이기는노하우 #바카라 백전백승 #바카라 따는법 #바카라 게임 할수있는곳 #바카라 블랙잭 #바카라 숫자흐름 #라이브 바카라게임 #바카라중독 #바카라 마틴 #검증놀이터 #가입꽁 #입금꽁 #신꽁 #가입머니 #sureman #먹튀레이더 #먹튀헌터 #온라인카지노 합법 #온라인카지노 게임 #아시아카지노 #방송카지노 #카지노추천 #호텔카지노사이트추천 #호텔계카지노사이트소개 #호텔카지노사이트주소 #호텔카지노이기는방법 #에볼루션 #바카라주소 #해외카지노주소 #우리계열카지노 #캄보디아카지노후기 #밀리언클럽카지노 #인터넷바카라사이트 #카지노폰배팅소개 #바카라폰배팅소개 #카지노폰배팅 #바카라이기는규칙 #카지노쿠폰 #카지노무료쿠폰 #다이사이게임사이트 #카지노배팅추천 #호텔카지노사이트 #카지노 게임종류 #카지노 무료쿠폰 #초보주식투자방법 #라이브바카라추천 #주식투자 방법 #주식 종목 선정 방법 #주식 잘하는 방법 #플러스카지노사이트 #주식 복리 방법 #주식 매도 전략 #주식 매도 잘하는 법 #메이저카지노사이트 #주식 매도 수익률 #정선카지노사이트추천 #정선카지노사이트소개 #정선카지노사이트 #필리핀카지노사이트 #인터넷포커게임 #실시간카지노하는곳 #인터넷바카라주소 #카지노이기는방법 #인터넷바카라사이트추천 #인터넷카지노사이트추천 #인터넷바카라사이트주소 #인터넷다이사이노하우 #카지노주소후기 #인터넷강원랜드 #인터넷카지노추천 #워커힐카지노후기 #카지노동호회체험 #해외 온라인 카지노 #온라인카지노사이트추천 #온라인바카라사이트추천 #인터넷카지노주소 #온라인카지노 순위 #카지노 게임 순위 #온라인블랙잭 #온라인바카라주소 #바카라게임설명 #에볼루션카지노 가입 #카지노 보증업체 #에볼루션 카지노 쿠폰 #안전공원 #안전한카지노사이트추천 #안전한바카라사이트추천 #안전한카지노사이트주소 #안전한바카라사이트소개 #안전바카라사이트추천 #안전바카라사이트주소 #안전카지노사이트추천 #안전바카라 #메이저바카라 #안전놀이터주소 #주식사이트 #아시안카지노사이트추천 #아시안카지노사이트소개 #아시안카지노 #아시안바카라 #아시아카지노사이트 #아시아바카라 #썬시티카지노주소 #릴게임사이트 #실시간카지노체험 #안전카지노사이트주소 #실시간카지노사이트추천 #실시간바카라사이트주소 #실시간카지노사이트소개 #실시간바카라사이트추천 #실시간카지노 #라이브바카라 #실시간바카라추천 #실시간라이브바카라주소 #라이브블랙잭사이트추천 #실시간 라이브 바카라 #서울카지노주소 #모바일카지노주소 #서울카지노사이트추천 #서울카지노사이트소개 #서울카지노사이트 #카지노하는곳 #생중계카지노사이트추천 #생중계카지노사이트소개 #생중계카지노사이트주소 #생중계바카라사이트추천 #생방송카지노체험 #필리핀카지노체험 #생방송바카라 #샌즈카지노주소 #라이브바카라사이트 #사설카지노하는곳 #메이저바카라소개 #사설카지노사이트소개 #사설바카라주소 #사설바카라사이트주소 #사설카지노사이트추천 #사설바카라사이트소개 #사설바카라사이트추천 #사설바카라사이트 #바카라사이트추천 #바카라게임추천 #비트코인 전망 #비트코인 시세 #블랙잭사이트주소 #부산카지노주소 #블랙잭게임방법 #플러스카지노주소 #베트남카지노팁 #지노게임사이트목록 #바카라하는곳주소 #바카라비법 #바카라하는곳 #온라인바카라 #실시간카지노주소 #바카라폰배팅하는방법 #카지노폰배팅하는곳 #바카라폰배팅추천 #카지노폰배팅추천 #바카라추천인 #바카라전략 #바카라규칙 #바카라이기는요령 #바카라 분석법 #바카라이기는법 #룰렛주소 #바카라사이트쿠폰 #바카라 커뮤니티 #카지노사이트추천 #바카라베팅고수 #에볼루션카지노 #바카라배팅 #바카라분석법 #바카라돈따는법 #바카라 그림보는법 #바카라그림흐름 #바카라전략배팅 #실시간카지노사이트주소 #바카라게임사이트 #바카라게임방법 #바카라베팅법 #바카라게임규칙 #온라인룰렛사이트 #바카라 필승전략 #바카라 필승법 #바카라 노하우 #바카라 메이저 #메이저놀이터추천 #바카라 게임방법 #바카라 잘하는방법 #바카라 검증사이트 #강원랜드카지노추천 #바카라 강원랜드 #바카라 룰 #모바일카지노게임 #온라인카지노주소 #모바일바카라주소 #모바일카지노사이트 #모바일바카라사이트 #명품카지노추천 #바카라 돈따는법 #명품카지노사이트 #바카라폰배팅 #메이저카지노추천 #메이저카지노주소 #실시간카지노사이트 #메이저카지노 #실시간바카라 #메이저카지노 사이트 #메이저바카라주소 #마카오카지노주소 #필리핀카지노주소 #마카오카지노사이트추천 #마카오카지노사이트소개 #마카오카지노사이트주소 #마카오온라인카지노추천 #슬롯머신추천 #라이브카지노사이트추천 #라이브카지노사이트소개 #라이브카지노사이트주소 #라이브바카라사이트추천 #모바일바카라 #라이브바카라사이트소개 #라이브카지노하는곳 #라이브놀이터주소 #온라인토토 #라스베가스카지노 #마카오카지노사이트 #꽁머니카페 #카지노꽁머니 #꽁머니카지노 #강원랜드카지노소개 #강원랜드카지노주소 #강원랜드카지노사이트추천 #강원랜드카지노사이트소개 #가상화폐 시세 #코라아카지노 #코라아바카라 #카지노하는법 #카지노게임추천 #카지노노하우 #우리카지노게임 #슈퍼카지노 #월드카지노 #바카라노하우 #바카라게임 #바카라하는법 #메이저놀이터 순위 #라이브 바카라 조작 #메이저놀이터 윈윈 #메이저검정카지노사이트주소 #메이저놀이터주소추천 #제주카지노현장 #명품계열카지노사이트 #에볼루션 카지노 이용방법 #안전한바카라사이트 #카지노배팅하는방법 #강원랜드카지노사이트 #아시안카지노사이트 #안전바카라사이트 #안전한카지노사이트 #에불루션 바카라게임 #@Major 사이트 #AG 카지노 포인트 "

amoa0ina · ゲーム
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Suddenly Love Exists

Shiro Mae Fajardo is a dedicated student of Chaó Yáng University along with her best friend Lynx Bañes, but the two of them mostly have the world on their own and never let anyone be part of them for they rarely trust anyone from the prestigious university they entered. As they're taking their research they have a merge with another college and they met Asher Ning, who's one of the prominent students at their University. She is from a politician's family and is even friends with the University owner's nephew. She seems to like Shiro to be her friend and pursues her but Shiro's always in doubt. Asher's childhood best friends Yangyang Amelle Liu, Nathaniel "Nana" Im, and Mark Gonzales are worried about her and besides that, they don't want to meet Zhong Austin (The University Owner's nephew) and Shiro because they know how chaotic will be if he meets an unruly like her. As Asher continually pursues Shiro and chased her again, Shiro unintentionally gets off herself from Asher's grip on her shoulders and helplessly stumbled. Surprisingly, Austin came back from Shanghai without noticing his friends about it and misunderstood everything. He aggressively grabbed Shiro's bag and accidentally drops the headphones which is the old headphone that was given by her father as his last gift. What will happen now to them when Austin just destroyed one of the important things that Shiro treasures the most? Hope you'll enjoy reading Suddenly Love Exists Love, Author Elle

Author_Elle · 若者
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The Last Daughter

Xyra Lumina Crescent, first born child to two full-blooded alphas and an alpha female. Xyra is hidden away from her pack, from the outside world and even from herself as she has no idea why she cannot shift or why she is hidden away in a temple to train, train and train. Far away from her family and younger siblings, Xyra sought freedom and to be able to be with her family. But she is trapped and watched by the ladies of the temple of females. A vision of an attack on her pack force Xyra to break free in other to save her parents who would die in the attack, and her people who would be taken hostage. Xyra returns home, but she does not just get the easy life she thought she would get. She discovers that maybe staying at the temple where life was easy was better after all. Who is Xyra? And what is The Last Daughter? ____ ‘What will happen if he finds his mate and she dies?’ I asked the most obvious question. Dad's wolf gave mine a look. ‘Xyra, did you see anything?’ ‘Yes, not clear, but a strong enough warning. He's going to run mad, isn't he?’ ‘All lycans do when they lose their mates. Which is why the goddess restrain from giving them one.’    Which was true. With how easy they lost their minds after losing their erasthasis, it was best they didn't have one. No one wanted a powerful lycan to go wild and wipe out an entire population, just because their soulmate died. It indeed was why they didn't get one too often. In fact, one could stay for a thousand years and not hear of a lycan finding a mate. They usually just fall in love and get married or get married without love. The king was the strongest like I read. If him losing his mate would turn him against the entire population of living creatures, then maybe it is my duty to protect her. Maybe, just maybe this is what I am meant to do.

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OneArmedImmortal
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Kelvin_Ade
Kelvin_AdeLv4Kelvin_Ade

am not going to lie author you are a very good writer and you wrote you book very well but I can't stand your MC and don't understand everybody nowadays love writing about dark or villain MC but at least I can stand those but your MC killed everybody on his planet or even his universe just for a crazy experiment and then even add the guts to justify himself and the most unreasonable thing that happened was that that st*pid goddess THAT HER JOB WAS TO WEAVE AND SAFEGUARD FATE was like ho okay you have killed trillions cool, cool how about send you to an other with an OP system so you can you do what you do best MASS GENOCIDE instead of Eternal Damnation for you know the innocent people you have killed. and then he reincarnated and the first thing he did for the outside world was to throw a nuke on it killing hundreds of thousands if not millions of people just for a monster sample when he could have done it another way and he dears think of himself as a hero. honestly I am not against killing or a mad scientist but everyone should have a bottom line or even a drop of humanity, let's take Lex Luther he is somewhat a mad scientist and as much as I hate for some his atrocities I respect him a lot because behind every he has done or willing to do when it time to step up to defend humanity he does it Gallantly almost heroic that the kind of humanity everyone should have especially the MC of a story I mean kids read this for Chris sake, we are humans not monster. I used to Miss the good old days were reincarnation and cheat fanfic and novels are based on karma and the good deeds the MC has done to deserve the chance to reincarnate with gifts and powers from the ROB, those were good times honestly. author you are good at writing I mean really, really, really good and i am not writing this review to discourage you in any way, instead I think webnovel needs more good writers which you are one of them. I just want to encourage you to please write an MC with humanity someone with a bottom line with a little bit of positivity, because the world needs more positivity because even I my self have been in a bad place and it's thanks to God and other fictional characters like Spiderman and especially Superman I read some of his comics that didn't involve fighting especially kingdom come I helped me take my mind off the bad stuff and see hope that makes me wonder why I hate Superman in first place, then I got to know Clark Kent not just Superman and the massage his character sent. I wish you could also write positive MC with your talent I wish you good luck

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

The history? Very good. The plot? neither good nor bad, the MC seems to like burning entire cities just to defeat the weakest Kaiju in the whole saga (he has a jeager suit, burning the city is unnecessary and edgy) The story has potential, but the MC is just disappointing. The author bit more than he could bite, I'm talking about the knowledge of the MC and his attitudes, the MC does not know how to do anything that does not have to do with the knowledge that the system gave him, Wasn't he a polymath? So why doesn't he seem to know anything about other branches of technology? He only mentions them and ventures into them when the system provides him with the relevant knowledge. About the MC's attitudes, I don't know, but instead of seeming "evil" as the author wants to portray him, he actually acts like a random geek, I talk about his thoughts,the MC has ideas that I could come up with and I'm not a polymath genius. That's why I say and repeat that the author bit off more than he could chew.

CafeconLeche
CafeconLecheLv5CafeconLeche

the author is not mentally well enough to be able to create this kind of protagonist. He has no motives for doing what he does nor a sad past that made him have that mentality, just a mentally unbalanced and psychopathic mc. can you at least put the villain label so I don't waste my time reading this.

Gabinete2k
Gabinete2kLv1Gabinete2k

It's really hard to find a good pacific ring fanfic, so 5 stars you got, my friend. I'm very excited to read more of this. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Slothiticus
SlothiticusLv13Slothiticus

The writing quality is good and it has the potential to be a good story. That being said it isn't the MC seems to just make decisions at random while calling himself intelligent even though his logic is deeply flawed. most of the novel goes on tangents related to either how awesome MC is or some random topic causing the story to be almost non existent. The few times the story does poke through it happens with little explanation as to why or how. An example is him attacking the first kaiju with a satellite which he magically has with no explanation as to how he was able to get it launched into space from his house with nobody the wiser. I was ready for the kaiju to show up hoping the actuall story would start but it's over in less than half a chapter then it's back to listening to the MCs thoughts about stupid stuff that would be fine if it wasn't the entirety of the novel.

strange_skeleton
strange_skeletonLv11strange_skeleton

I like the mc but also I need more also [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Sheriff_Doge
Sheriff_DogeLv4Sheriff_Doge

it has potential and is Incredibly well written i can see the effort the author put into this AND I NEED MORE (In all seriousness, Pretty good work)

Sir_Squirrel
Sir_SquirrelLv4Sir_Squirrel

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InfamousFudge_Yt
InfamousFudge_YtLv13InfamousFudge_Yt

The Author should go write cultivation novels

kinggaming
kinggamingLv15kinggaming

his character is decent but needs work unless you have watched the movie or read the books you wouldn't really have any background and the conversation dialogue and and just everything else needs work I like the premise and where it was going but it isn't there and it's just hard to read and boring the author did a good job at trying but it needs improvement

Timotius
TimotiusLv14Timotius

you should put a tag for the novel. like heartless mc or dark. something like that so from the start i dont expect he become good or condoning his act.

OTS
OTSLv4OTS

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raiinz
raiinzLv13raiinz

i dont Like the Story or the mc's character too i mean DARK crazy

Destin_Leal
Destin_LealLv4Destin_Leal

You had a great story going here but no matter what it is still your decision whether it continues or not

MrGanja890
MrGanja890Lv4MrGanja890

Man it was an interesting story to read for time pass I had fun while reading as the author said all should end.. goodbye 👋🏻👋🏻😭😭 i will miss you

Ethan_Lopez_8440
Ethan_Lopez_8440Lv4Ethan_Lopez_8440

to many references i understand a few but overdoing it

ZinkTW
ZinkTWLv2ZinkTW

No está mal, pero tú personaje principal siemplemente arruina todo, si quien lo lee está dispuesto a aguantar a un protagonista arrogante y completamente psicópata adelante, no es mi taza de te

Hunten_King
Hunten_KingLv4Hunten_King

It was better than all the other pacific rim fanfic I have read before seriously hoped you would have continued to write more chapters of it…

Daotianshen
DaotianshenLv4Daotianshen

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