webnovel
Slothiticus
SlothiticusLv142yr
2023-04-12 07:59

The writing quality is good and it has the potential to be a good story. That being said it isn't the MC seems to just make decisions at random while calling himself intelligent even though his logic is deeply flawed. most of the novel goes on tangents related to either how awesome MC is or some random topic causing the story to be almost non existent. The few times the story does poke through it happens with little explanation as to why or how. An example is him attacking the first kaiju with a satellite which he magically has with no explanation as to how he was able to get it launched into space from his house with nobody the wiser. I was ready for the kaiju to show up hoping the actuall story would start but it's over in less than half a chapter then it's back to listening to the MCs thoughts about stupid stuff that would be fine if it wasn't the entirety of the novel.

In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System

OneArmedImmortal
4.1
43 Chs

Liked by 9 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
OneArmedImmortal
OneArmedImmortalAuthor

Reveal spoiler

2yr

Kelvin_Ade
Kelvin_AdeLv11

am not going to lie author you are a very good writer and you wrote you book very well but I can't stand your MC and don't understand everybody nowadays love writing about dark or villain MC but at least I can stand those but your MC killed everybody on his planet or even his universe just for a crazy experiment and then even add the guts to justify himself and the most unreasonable thing that happened was that that st*pid goddess THAT HER JOB WAS TO WEAVE AND SAFEGUARD FATE was like ho okay you have killed trillions cool, cool how about send you to an other with an OP system so you can you do what you do best MASS GENOCIDE instead of Eternal Damnation for you know the innocent people you have killed. and then he reincarnated and the first thing he did for the outside world was to throw a nuke on it killing hundreds of thousands if not millions of people just for a monster sample when he could have done it another way and he dears think of himself as a hero. honestly I am not against killing or a mad scientist but everyone should have a bottom line or even a drop of humanity, let's take Lex Luther he is somewhat a mad scientist and as much as I hate for some his atrocities I respect him a lot because behind every he has done or willing to do when it time to step up to defend humanity he does it Gallantly almost heroic that the kind of humanity everyone should have especially the MC of a story I mean kids read this for Chris sake, we are humans not monster. I used to Miss the good old days were reincarnation and cheat fanfic and novels are based on karma and the good deeds the MC has done to deserve the chance to reincarnate with gifts and powers from the ROB, those were good times honestly. author you are good at writing I mean really, really, really good and i am not writing this review to discourage you in any way, instead I think webnovel needs more good writers which you are one of them. I just want to encourage you to please write an MC with humanity someone with a bottom line with a little bit of positivity, because the world needs more positivity because even I my self have been in a bad place and it's thanks to God and other fictional characters like Spiderman and especially Superman I read some of his comics that didn't involve fighting especially kingdom come I helped me take my mind off the bad stuff and see hope that makes me wonder why I hate Superman in first place, then I got to know Clark Kent not just Superman and the massage his character sent. I wish you could also write positive MC with your talent I wish you good luck

2yr
CafeconLeche
CafeconLecheLv5

the author is not mentally well enough to be able to create this kind of protagonist. He has no motives for doing what he does nor a sad past that made him have that mentality, just a mentally unbalanced and psychopathic mc. can you at least put the villain label so I don't waste my time reading this.

2yr
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

The history? Very good. The plot? neither good nor bad, the MC seems to like burning entire cities just to defeat the weakest Kaiju in the whole saga (he has a jeager suit, burning the city is unnecessary and edgy) The story has potential, but the MC is just disappointing. The author bit more than he could bite, I'm talking about the knowledge of the MC and his attitudes, the MC does not know how to do anything that does not have to do with the knowledge that the system gave him, Wasn't he a polymath? So why doesn't he seem to know anything about other branches of technology? He only mentions them and ventures into them when the system provides him with the relevant knowledge. About the MC's attitudes, I don't know, but instead of seeming "evil" as the author wants to portray him, he actually acts like a random geek, I talk about his thoughts,the MC has ideas that I could come up with and I'm not a polymath genius. That's why I say and repeat that the author bit off more than he could chew.

2yr
Gabinete2k
Gabinete2kLv2

It's really hard to find a good pacific ring fanfic, so 5 stars you got, my friend. I'm very excited to read more of this. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

2yr
strange_skeleton
strange_skeletonLv14

I like the mc but also I need more also [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
Sir_Squirrle
Sir_SquirrleLv4

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Sheriff_Doge
Sheriff_DogeLv4

it has potential and is Incredibly well written i can see the effort the author put into this AND I NEED MORE (In all seriousness, Pretty good work)

2yr
InfamousFudge_Yt
InfamousFudge_YtLv14

The Author should go write cultivation novels

2yr
Related Stories

Marvel: A Man with a System

David Arthur Brown was an ordinary man from another Earth—a software developer and avid fan of movies and comics—until a fire claimed his life. But instead of death, he wakes up in the Marvel Cinematic Universe, inhabiting the body of a man with the same name who had fallen into a coma during the Chitauri invasion. With no way back and no idea how or why he was here, David must navigate his new reality while grappling with the loss of his past life. Things take an even stranger turn when a glowing blue interface appears before him—an enigmatic *system* bound to his existence, offering quests, rewards, and a mysterious lottery function. But David isn’t in a rush to embrace its power. Paranoia grips him as he questions the system’s true purpose. His first quest is simple: recover from his injuries and return home. Yet as he regains his strength, the weight of his new life presses down on him. With the past behind him and an uncertain future ahead, David must decide how to survive in a world of gods, heroes, and monsters—where his next move could mean the difference between life and death. Will he carve his own path in this universe, or will he become just another casualty in a world shaped by legends? ------------------------------------------------------------------ Disclaimer: I own nothing other than my ideas. ------------------------------------------------------------------ The image is generated using AI

Ryder_Blackthorne · Movies
4.4
33 Chs

Super Template System In Marvel and Beyond

I never imagined this would happen to me. Reincarnation? A second chance? Into a fictional world, no less? It was the stuff of wild stories, impossible dreams, and late-night "what ifs." But life has a funny way of playing with your expectations. When the choice was offered—life as I knew it or a chance to die and be reborn somewhere else—how could I say no? The catch? I wouldn’t return to just any world. No peaceful afterlife, no utopia waiting for me. Instead, I landed in the heart of chaos. Here I am, standing in the shadows of giants—of gods, heroes, and monsters. Welcome to the Marvel universe, where cities are playgrounds for battles that could shake the world, and everyday people like me are nothing but collateral damage. But I’m not just another face in the crowd anymore. Somehow, I’ve got a role to play. My name in this world is Dave Garcia, and this is the story of how an ordinary guy from another life navigates a place where the impossible is an everyday reality. What would you do if you woke up in a world where the fate of everything could be changed with a snap of the fingers? Because that’s exactly what I’m trying to figure out. ******* Daily one chap release except on Sundays ******** I don't own marvel or any other character that I will depict here aside from my OC. Happy Reading. **** Advance chaps on : - patreon.com/FantasyLi

FantasyLi · Movies
3.5
223 Chs

The Twilight Gamer

Jack Sparrow, A young teen living in the small city of Forks in the year 2005 finds himself waking up one day with a blue holographic panel in front of his face. The system asks him to choose his own stats which it calls S.P.E.C.I.A.L Stats. It cautions the young man that his choice is irreversible but he doesn't give it much mind and rashly puts his stats points in. Follow the journey of Jack Sparrow as he experiences a whole new world and the outcome of his own rash decisions. *DISCLAIMER* This is a Twilight Fanfiction. MC pairing isn't going to be told at the beginning so please don't ask for it. This will not be a harem. The system is a mix of Fallout New Vegas but it's also original so don't expect everything on there to be here as well. If you don't mind those two then I wish you a great reading journey. If you want to support me and read ten chapters ahead then check out my Patreon at: Patreon.com/WhiteAuthor Posted on Royal Road and Scribble Hub.

WhiteAuthor · Movies
3.8
92 Chs

Marvel: Ned the Master of Mystic Arts

A smart teenager from our universe wakes up in the Marvel Universe as Ned Leeds, Spider-Man's best friend. But this isn’t the Ned you think you know. In his original world, he was a die-hard Marvel fan. He had seen every movie, binge-watched every series, and delved deep into the lore of the Marvel Cinematic Universe (MCU). Armed with an intricate knowledge of the future, he begins to subtly manipulate events in this universe, steering them toward a perfect future—one where the tragedies and heartbreaks of the Marvel universe can be avoided. When fate introduces him to the Mystic Arts, the world quickly realizes that Ned is far more than just comic relief. Even the Ancient One has to admit, "I was wrong—Ned is the best among us." With the Cloak of Levitation practically begging to stay by his side and powerful sorcery flowing through him, Ned becomes a rising star in the Marvel universe. His adventures don’t stop there. With his newfound abilities, Ned discovers the secrets of the multiverse and begins traveling across dimensions. From solving problems in alternate realities to mending broken worlds, Ned takes on challenges that even seasoned heroes wouldn’t dare to face. As he hops between universes, he learns the complexities of destiny, morality, and the weight of wielding such power. By knowing how events play out in the movies and series he once adored, Ned finds himself in a unique position to rewrite the timeline. Whether it’s nudging heroes like Tony Stark, Doctor Strange, or Thor to make better decisions or preventing devastating events like the Snap before they happen, his interventions slowly reshape the course of history. But with great knowledge comes great responsibility, and Ned soon realizes that altering the timeline is more complicated—and dangerous—than he could have imagined. Things aren’t all smooth sailing, though. After his dramatic glow-up—both in terms of magic and physique—his relationships start to shift. Even Wong can’t help but notice the peculiar way people glance at him now. "Ned’s a great guy, really. But after the weight loss… I can’t explain it, but something’s different." With humor, heart, and a heap of magical mishaps, Marvel: Ned the Master of Mystic Arts reimagines Ned Leeds as a master of mystic arts, juggling friendships, rewriting timelines, traveling through dimensions, and reshaping the chaotic Marvel universe. Are you ready to see the most unexpected hero rise to the occasion? ------------------ Access 40 chapters in advance on my Patreon: p@treon.com/PokePals Disclaimer: This is a translation work. I do not own the original content.

PokePals · Movies
3.3
114 Chs

KFP: Reborn as Po (Solo Leveling currently)

In a world where fate seems set in stone, a man from another life awakens in the body of Po, the bumbling panda destined to become the Dragon Warrior. Armed with foreknowledge of the future and an unwavering determination, he vows to rewrite the story—not just for himself, but to ensure that no one suffers under the shadow of impending villains like Tai Lung or Kai. Realizing that destiny alone is not enough, this new Po dedicates himself to rigorous training, drawing inspiration from legendary fighting styles like Qin Shi Huang's overwhelming precision and Kai's mastery over chi and Kung Fu. He pushes his body, mind, and spirit to their limits, striving to become the strongest warrior the Valley of Peace—and all of China—has ever known. But with great power comes unexpected consequences. As Po's actions ripple through the timeline, the balance of the world begins to shift. New challenges emerge, old foes grow more dangerous, and allies start to question the panda’s dramatic transformation. Can he truly protect those he loves, or will his desire to change fate bring about an even greater catastrophe? This is the story of a panda reborn, who dares to defy destiny and forge a path of his own—a path of strength, peace, and unyielding resolve. Po is no longer just the chosen one. He’s the one who chooses.

WRizz1 · Movies
3.6
114 Chs

Adapting in Marvel

Brian transmigrated into the Marvel universe and became a newly awakened Mutant, obtaining the ability to "See through and understand the laws of operation of everything." At the time of Mutant's first battle, in order to make himself stronger, Brian turned into a brain-opening maniac without hesitation, observed Mutant's brain, mastered its ability, and combined thousands of variant abilities in one. At the moment of the final battle between X-Men and Hellfire Club, Brian ascended the throne and became the new king of Hellfire Club. Then he faced Apocalypse and plundered Apocalypse's variant ability. He also used Kitty Pryde's ability and upgraded it to travel through various Marvel timelines, harvest Mutant Ability, and finally grew into the immortal Mutant God. And all this started when Brian just awakened his ability and met a black taxi driver named Darwin. By plundering Darwin's reactive evolution at the beginning, Brian had the foundation to gain a foothold in the Mutant universe, and also made him a level 5 Mutant on par with Black King Shaw. _______ This is a Translation. MTL: Begining as Mutant, Hero Sera Template

LiveandLove · Movies
4.0
91 Chs
Login