Fate/Mercenary: A travel across the omniverse.

Writing Quality: It's neither the best nor the worst, it's average. Though I would say that articulation of sentences have improved over the chapters. Hopefully the writing keeps improving. Story Development: Honestly, the author is quite good with the development and planning of the story. I quite enjoy the way the story has developed so far, I hope it will be the same in the future. Character Design: Not chuuni enough 🤣 (that's not a complaint btw) Updating Stability: Probably the only weak point on why this fanfic is not popular enough. If it updated more regularly, I am sure this would be high on rankings. World Background: Masterfully done, there are some mysteries that haven't been solved but I feel that it's better that way.

Shameless author making a self review as tradition. Well I hope everyone that read this history enjoys it, and if you don't like it that's fine I can't make everyone happy hahaha. If you have constructive criticism please go a head, that will help me a lot to improve my writing skills and make me grow as an author.

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honestly it's a good fic i like the dynamics between the characters but the problem is that it's a world hopping fanfics and it's taking too long in just a mere harry potter world when the next one is dxd ... the update is too slow plus the author sadly dropped for some time making all the hype cool down

The story is good and I have nothing to complain about when it comes to writing quality I don’t really know much about the update stability but when it comes to character design I still don’t know what the Mc looks like and all the development in the story is doing exactly what the system says the Mc is the system’s slave and every quest is so basic that it gets mind numbing and makes reading more so annoying

the mcs and other characters are much better than most fanfics. tho it is annoying that fully half the chapters are notices for the readers. does Noone know how to put things in the comments section? or edit chapters with an author note?

this fic is good, but i dislike the MC due to his immature, im currently in chapter 20/21, and hope mc get character development fast since i dont want to read this fic while cringing at the mc lol

You've come a long way my dude

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Interesting story has Actual plot instead of just going with original plot of the world! I love it! Would be better with more stable updates.

Hasta el capítulo en que se escribe esta reseña, cap 10, puedo decir que promete muy buen contenido para el futuro. solo espero que conforme avance la historia, el carácter del protagonista siga mejorando. Pdta: Hermione para el harem, por favor.

Looking forward to this also need to update faster [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp]

Some would say giving 5stars is too much, but I want the rating of this to go up even for just a little. 🥺👍It's not perfect, but it's realistically good, like Uncle is good(wait, that sounded weirdnin my head😅).If you're wondering if you should read this, DO IT, READ THIS, SAVE IT, SHARE IT.

The character development is good, this story is very interesting to read. Good job author. i love your work

A pretty good read. Not the best out there but definitely a good one.

Interesting start, this is fun.. some errors here and there but not much, hope the story continue to be interesting and fun as well in the future development 👍

This story is better as the Chapters go one... can't wait for the Arcs and the Characters to develop...I recommend it to everyone as it's interesting, addictive, engaging and most of all... 😁FUNNY

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a guy put 1 star without giving his opinion, that's why I put 5 stars, the only thing that is missing is updates but I understand, the author works.