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ThreshGasm
ThreshGasmLv41yr
2023-04-05 16:43

honestly it's a good fic i like the dynamics between the characters but the problem is that it's a world hopping fanfics and it's taking too long in just a mere harry potter world when the next one is dxd ... the update is too slow plus the author sadly dropped for some time making all the hype cool down

Fate/Mercenary: A travel across the omniverse.

Stuckinapileofbook
4.6
64 Chs

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StuckinapileofbookAuthor

Thanks you for the review. Yeah I hate that I was not able to not update for a long time, but you know how life is and IRL I had a lot of work hahaha. But now I have more free time so I will try to keep the updates consistently.

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KenTheSlayer
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Writing Quality: It's neither the best nor the worst, it's average. Though I would say that articulation of sentences have improved over the chapters. Hopefully the writing keeps improving. Story Development: Honestly, the author is quite good with the development and planning of the story. I quite enjoy the way the story has developed so far, I hope it will be the same in the future. Character Design: Not chuuni enough 🤣 (that's not a complaint btw) Updating Stability: Probably the only weak point on why this fanfic is not popular enough. If it updated more regularly, I am sure this would be high on rankings. World Background: Masterfully done, there are some mysteries that haven't been solved but I feel that it's better that way.

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Stuckinapileofbook
StuckinapileofbookAuthor

Shameless author making a self review as tradition. Well I hope everyone that read this history enjoys it, and if you don't like it that's fine I can't make everyone happy hahaha. If you have constructive criticism please go a head, that will help me a lot to improve my writing skills and make me grow as an author.

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wisdomseeker
wisdomseekerLv14

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ghast_shooter66
ghast_shooter66Lv4

The story is good and I have nothing to complain about when it comes to writing quality I don’t really know much about the update stability but when it comes to character design I still don’t know what the Mc looks like and all the development in the story is doing exactly what the system says the Mc is the system’s slave and every quest is so basic that it gets mind numbing and makes reading more so annoying

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Gawd
GawdLv15

the mcs and other characters are much better than most fanfics. tho it is annoying that fully half the chapters are notices for the readers. does Noone know how to put things in the comments section? or edit chapters with an author note?

1yr
cafreine
cafreineLv4

this fic is good, but i dislike the MC due to his immature, im currently in chapter 20/21, and hope mc get character development fast since i dont want to read this fic while cringing at the mc lol

1yr
Shishio1
Shishio1Lv3

You've come a long way my dude

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