The story is good and I have nothing to complain about when it comes to writing quality I don’t really know much about the update stability but when it comes to character design I still don’t know what the Mc looks like and all the development in the story is doing exactly what the system says the Mc is the system’s slave and every quest is so basic that it gets mind numbing and makes reading more so annoying
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LIKEThank you for your review, as for how the MCU looks like I know that I don't talk a lot about it, but am sure than more than once I described his physical appearance. To some degree I admit that he does what the system ask him, but tbh what did you expected? In the current world he is in a mission and he agreed to follow the missions.
I get what your saying I’m and I am fine if he follows just the system’s quests a lot I’m just saying the quests are basic and are over used or feel really similar to a lot of other over used quests in other fan fic with system
Yeah I understand that, maybe because I am still inexperienced I got repetitive hahahaha. But I think that the mission on chapter XXVII with the exception of the first point of the mission I got a little bit more creative hahaha. Anyways I will take this as reference to improve in the next mission so readers don't get bored or tired, thanks you very much for your opinion.