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SHADOWS_69
SHADOWS_69Lv141yr
2023-11-03 23:55

A pretty good read. Not the best out there but definitely a good one.

Fate/Mercenary: A travel across the omniverse.

Stuckinapileofbook
4.6
64 Chs

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Stuckinapileofbook
StuckinapileofbookAuthor

Thanks you for the review. I am glad that you are enjoying my fff, I try to improve with each chapter.

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KenTheSlayer
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Writing Quality: It's neither the best nor the worst, it's average. Though I would say that articulation of sentences have improved over the chapters. Hopefully the writing keeps improving. Story Development: Honestly, the author is quite good with the development and planning of the story. I quite enjoy the way the story has developed so far, I hope it will be the same in the future. Character Design: Not chuuni enough 馃ぃ (that's not a complaint btw) Updating Stability: Probably the only weak point on why this fanfic is not popular enough. If it updated more regularly, I am sure this would be high on rankings. World Background: Masterfully done, there are some mysteries that haven't been solved but I feel that it's better that way.

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Stuckinapileofbook
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Shameless author making a self review as tradition. Well I hope everyone that read this history enjoys it, and if you don't like it that's fine I can't make everyone happy hahaha. If you have constructive criticism please go a head, that will help me a lot to improve my writing skills and make me grow as an author.

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ThreshGasm
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honestly it's a good fic i like the dynamics between the characters but the problem is that it's a world hopping fanfics and it's taking too long in just a mere harry potter world when the next one is dxd ... the update is too slow plus the author sadly dropped for some time making all the hype cool down

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ghast_shooter66
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The story is good and I have nothing to complain about when it comes to writing quality I don鈥檛 really know much about the update stability but when it comes to character design I still don鈥檛 know what the Mc looks like and all the development in the story is doing exactly what the system says the Mc is the system鈥檚 slave and every quest is so basic that it gets mind numbing and makes reading more so annoying

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Gawd
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the mcs and other characters are much better than most fanfics. tho it is annoying that fully half the chapters are notices for the readers. does Noone know how to put things in the comments section? or edit chapters with an author note?

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cafreine
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this fic is good, but i dislike the MC due to his immature, im currently in chapter 20/21, and hope mc get character development fast since i dont want to read this fic while cringing at the mc lol

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You've come a long way my dude

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