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The serene Swordsman

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Swordsmanship has always been our Main Character's passion. He got into this passion due to some of his favourite characters in anime and manga. His favourite mangas? Bleach and One Piece. That's where swordsmanship plays a major role in the stories. And he loves it. So imagine how he reacts when he gets the chance to get reincarnated into the world of Bleach as an SI with another template of his choice.

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Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

A man from an Earth gets the choice to start over in any Universe and chooses an Alternate Pokemon Universe. Let us see if his journey to the top is succesful and the impact he will have on his new world. Pokemon is owned by Nintendo, Game Freak and Creatures Inc. I just use their sandbox for the plot of my MC and my OCs. This will be a "slow" paced story, in fact it's "super slow paced", so please don't expect the MC to directly start his journey in 20 chapters or so, actually multiply that by like 15. A lot is going to happen before that happens. The first 10-20 chapters or so are information heavy, depending on what kind of reader you are. I try to keep my chapter length between 2000 and 3000 words per chapter. My release rate is 4 chapter/week for now. I have a patre*n for those that want to support me with access to some advance chapters as a thank you. patre*n.com/Azrail93 This is an alternate pokemon universe so there will be differences to the games, manga and anime. So if something in the story is different it is most likely on purpose. The original sources are seen as suggestions not laws. Differences can be: Type variants, evolution conditions, strength mechanics, world building and more. If I am at some point asking for reader input I will do so but otherwise I will ignore most suggestions. So please don't spam things like catch this pokemon or do that next. I have my plot planned and external input will be considered when asked for. If I see a suggestion that I believe fit my plot flow I will use it and will credit the commentor. Comments on spelling and grammar mistakes are welcome. I will try to correct said mistakes with time. Constructive criticism will be read and considered. Insult and hate comments will be ignored or deleted depending on severity. Readers naturally can comment their dislike but one worders will be ignored. If the reason for the dislike is explained I will read it. Like previously mentioned pure insults and hate comments will be ignored or deleted. The same is true for simple hate reviews or insulting ones. Reviews conplaining about something I warned about, such as the slow pace, will be deleted as well.

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AvatarLOK2
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Its not a bad story. It has a lot of potential. I like the ideas and the character himself. Its pretty good. If there were any problems, it would be that you tell more than show. If you improve on that then the story would be even better. The ideas are there. Its a fanfic so five stars i guess.

Propht
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Tampilkan spoiler

Cedric_7512
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Not a bad story lil bro. But I just can’t give you the full 5 Stars across the board. Sry about that. 😏

Bullshitter
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This fulfilled my desires on so many levels. Such a beautiful story. I hope the author never drops this.

Passerby_Venne
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Great take on the story. The pacing of the first 5 or so chapters is a bit off. But everything else is really good so far (12 chapters.) The chapters are longer than average and it's well written. My only complaint is that the author is releasing three fangics at the same time, which means that the chapter release rate is slow. It would be better if the author focused on a single story at a time, and released at least one chapter a day instead of 1 chapter every 2 days. Waiting two days takes the reader out of his immersion as one might forget what the last chapter was about. But 1-2 chapters a day would surely make this story very popular. There are no other flaws big enough to point out. 4.3/5 stars for this story!

ParadoxMind
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Not Bad at all! Although it can get bland a bit, so you can make it more "alive", you know what I mean?

PikaDEO_978
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u just gota focus on that update stability

Anmol_Shrestha_7840
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Where are the chapters man it always the good novel authors who drops the story . Give me chaptrerssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

SAHIL_PREET
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i think mc is aging to fast for soul society int beginning

bhabba
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great story so far, hope you won't drop and #NoHarem

Br4tsch
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Love it 💯 % Recomendet

YoungMaster_Oogway
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There is not much to rate as this is a new FF. I will have to wait for more chapters but till now it's all good the character development is very vague. Good story keep up the good work.

Ibrahim_NiR
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fantástico, tengo un problema de que la historia va muy rápido en algunos momentos pero es una gran historia

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LazyFou98
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A very good concept for the story. I have never seen anyone make a story with flashy flash as a character, even if it's just a template. Overall a good read. Keep up the good work!!!!!

agrayo5
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I love the whole thing so much.

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Drimy
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Loving it so far! Like the templates chosen. Glad that the mc isn’t a copy of byakuya. Not a fan of his law above all mentality lol. Hope you don’t drop this!

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