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Tales of the Demon Lord

Penulis: sinisteSmile07
Fantasy
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What is Tales of the Demon Lord

Baca novel Tales of the Demon Lord yang ditulis oleh penulis sinisteSmile07 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Long ago, A demon Lord ruled the realm and after wrecking havoc and chaos to the world he was defeated. But soon after hundreads of years have passed, a man named Josh from our world was transported t...

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Long ago, A demon Lord ruled the realm and after wrecking havoc and chaos to the world he was defeated. But soon after hundreads of years have passed, a man named Josh from our world was transported to the said realm soon after an incident happened to him at work and finds himself in a vast unknown forest. The question now is: Why is he transported to that world?

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Dungeon Controll

Alex your average teenager with a twist. He is addicted to strategy and base building game. But not in a health way. Every single Game he played he became better and better. To the point of 0 loses on his Smurf accounts. But scared and shy as he is, he made a “fake identity”. One day on his school trip to the museum of lost artifacts. Your average Museum with a little bit of idea and ta bit of boring. The most attractive item of todays bucket list is. The destiny stone found in Egypt buried by sand. Interesting enough it entails a tale which magically translate when read by others. Interested he goes for a dip after being pushed by others to read it. After saying the last line, he vanishes. To never be seen again. Funny enough it became a hit by many spreading so fast it became a folk lore. That was the introduction and now comes the interesting part. Dungeon control is your average base building survival horror story with an extra. It comes from Arechnocadia one of my Projects and lives in the same multiverse. You will see Alex do stuff never been done before by others. It entails a system explained by the first chapter and history plus elements already known by many readers. It’s quite interesting if you ask me but be aware, I’m not almighty so if you notice some contradiction or just mindshit pls tell. Every criticism is great if it entails: 1. The problem 2. The solution If you enjoy the story check out my webpage "arechnocadia.com" and join the Project.

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed!

I_refuse
I_refuseLv4I_refuse

Ok so I have not read that far but i still tihink its better than allot of other novels out there. the only thing that drives me absolutly nuts are the tnse swaps. We are in the past, oh now we arrived at the present so.. no back to past. It is annyoing and I am goona drop your novel for some time hoping to pick it up again either fixed or on a day where I am more motivated.

Alexandra_An
Alexandra_AnLv2Alexandra_An

An interesting story. I can see that you have an idea in your mind, so follow it! You're doing stunning job and I absolutely don't want to discourage you, on the contrary, I encourage you to make some minor corrections... I just wonder what language do you translate from, because sometimes what you write doesn't sound like english... Just pay more attention to language. Happy New Year!

ujjwalanushka34
ujjwalanushka34Lv1ujjwalanushka34

The plot of the story is interesting and seems promising. Well done with character development. One thing I would suggest is that you should try to improve the flow of your story as at some parts it seems a bit awkward/off. But overall, great job!

TaintedMetal
TaintedMetalLv2TaintedMetal

The Pros: - Josh is a well rounded protagonist. Unlike some other protagonists in books, he is not some "anime fan/otaku, gamer, NEET, person who had a tragic life, or is so called average." Even if Josh was an average person, the author did a good job at showing rather than telling. - At the moment, the main setting does invoke curiosity, we can see how things are and the people (or creatures) that live there via Josh's interactions - So far Josh is doing what he can to survive in this whole new world. I like that he's not some chosen one or somebody who immediately needs to be a hero. The Cons (what I think needs improvement) - At first the story is in third person but then shifts to first person, and it's still the same character: Josh. It's clear that Josh is the protagonist but I think one type of POV style is enough. - There's not much to say about the world itself, what makes it unique than other fantasy worlds in other novels, but I believe we will see that in future chapters. Also, as much as there's the phrase Medieval Europe to describe castles/buildings, there's bound to be other novels going through that medieval style. If there was even more description it be more detailed than general information. - How Josh dies and gets transferred to the new world. I'm grateful that it's not another truck or whatever, but I think it's best to show us a little but more about Josh, who he was before he died, and if he died overworking, it might make sense if his immunity system was weak, or if he was a workaholic. - It's nice that Josh has awareness that he is dead and is in a new world, but I doubt he is that ignorant of his previous life on Earth. Hopefully there's moments of him reflecting that in future chapters. It's a okay novel overall. Readers should at least give this a shot.

Chaitra_Anumula
Chaitra_AnumulaLv1Chaitra_Anumula

I am really intrigued by the plot and the parallel universe built by the author. very well written and the story has a flow. Congratulations on a job well done. Will definitely read more

Wolfgirl1215
Wolfgirl1215Lv2Wolfgirl1215

I would, wholeheartedly, recommend this book. It has a dramatic and really fantastic start, leaving you with so many questions about the plot and what will happen later in the book. I love the characters, the girl especially who is really quirky and has great dynamics with the lead. The way the Author writes is really smooth, descriptive, and it flows really easily. There were a couple of times I would have liked to see a bit more dramatic emphasis on events, but that's a minor preference. Definitely staying as one of my favourites, I am excited to see how the plot progresses as I read more.

The_divine_oracle
The_divine_oracleLv11The_divine_oracle

The premise of the book is really interesting; kind of reminded me of Greek mythology. The cover is a definite plus. It immediately caught my attention. Coming to the story, the story develops in an interesting and entertaining way. Keep up the good work.

Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02Lv11Aeipathy_02

Another isekai book to read 🥰 Nice. Writing quality. There are minimal g-errors but not really noticeable much and don't hinder your reading enjoyment. The narratives are easy to read. Stability of updates. I've seen no problems here. Story development. Flows smoothly. It has the isekai theme but the author makes it unique with his interesting plot and development. Character Design: All the characters have their own personas. You also will not get bored with the male lead with the narration of his thoughts. World background: Detailed and clean. The author knows how to show and not just simply tell with info. dumps. Overall a great read already! Keep it up, author! Greatly recommended if you are looking for refreshing isekai stories.

sinisterSmile07
sinisterSmile07Lv2sinisterSmile07

please leave a review and sorry for some errors I made, I'm still fixing it😅 but please leave a review or comment, vote if you like. Thanks in advance 😘

zd4zaaa
zd4zaaaLv1zd4zaaa

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Deborah_Adante
Deborah_AdanteLv1Deborah_Adante

I'm just here to post a star review, not to make any commentaries at all. hahaha, anyway. hope this helps you increase your rating. Goodluck on your work

Niel_Adante
Niel_AdanteLv1Niel_Adante

The story is interesting, but for some reasons, I think you need to make it more like appealing that every time a reader reads a line or two they will get hooked on it. :) But the story itself is good.

Jo_J
Jo_JLv13Jo_J

I love the picture as a cover page, but miss the title and an author ;) Interesting story and intriguing characters. You're doing well! Happy New Year!

GrotesqueIce
GrotesqueIceLv2GrotesqueIce

Storyline is very good. My interest is piqued. Will definitely follow this work through. Must improve in grammar and punctuation marks but those are just minimal and can easily be improved in the next chapters. Overall, very good! Keep it up!

phoenixhyperion
phoenixhyperionLv13phoenixhyperion

Just so you know, I prefer Josh POV rather than a third POV. There's an element of details and description in there unlike the former. You crypted him well author. I think I read a similar book somewhere about an MC experiencing lack of sleep due to stress, then he got transmitted to another world. But if I may suggest, I would like you to put more descriptive emotions and body language rather than generalizing your character's feelings. And be extra careful with your choice of words. I don't mean it as a bad thing, mind you, it's just that it may mislead your readers from the main point of your story. Believe me, your story has potential. Your character's personality is amusing. He's quick to adapt and flexible. You did a nice job there author! Keep up the good work!

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