Review Detail of ujjwalanushka34 in Tales of the Demon Lord

Item: Tales of the Demon Lord
Rating: 3.6

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ujjwalanushka34Lv13yrujjwalanushka34

The plot of the story is interesting and seems promising. Well done with character development. One thing I would suggest is that you should try to improve the flow of your story as at some parts it seems a bit awkward/off. But overall, great job!

Tales of the Demon Lord

sinisteSmile07

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Thanks for the review 😁 and for pinpointing the things that has to he improved👍🏻

3yr

ujjwalanushka34Lv1ujjwalanushka34

Ofc :) Happy new year!

sinisterSmile07:Thanks for the review 😁 and for pinpointing the things that has to he improved👍🏻

3yr