Review Detail of I_refuse in Tales of the Demon Lord

Ok so I have not read that far but i still tihink its better than allot of other novels out there. the only thing that drives me absolutly nuts are the tnse swaps. We are in the past, oh now we arrived at the present so.. no back to past. It is annyoing and I am goona drop your novel for some time hoping to pick it up again either fixed or on a day where I am more motivated.