Review Detail of phoenixhyperion in Tales of the Demon Lord

Just so you know, I prefer Josh POV rather than a third POV. There's an element of details and description in there unlike the former. You crypted him well author. I think I read a similar book somewhere about an MC experiencing lack of sleep due to stress, then he got transmitted to another world. But if I may suggest, I would like you to put more descriptive emotions and body language rather than generalizing your character's feelings. And be extra careful with your choice of words. I don't mean it as a bad thing, mind you, it's just that it may mislead your readers from the main point of your story. Believe me, your story has potential. Your character's personality is amusing. He's quick to adapt and flexible. You did a nice job there author! Keep up the good work!