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GOT:Spartan summoning system

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Kaius is in America’s strongest fighting force known as a navy seals. He died while saving multiple family’s in the kill zone. Kaius here’s a voice whose there brave one I am the god of war I was impressed by your actions so now you have the honor to be reincarnated by the strongest god there is, I’ll give you 5 wishes brave one. Based off the 300 movie. Your author here just want to let y’all know this is my first story and I’m knew to writing in general so work with me if anyone has suggestions let me know and I WILL MAKE ERRORS please don’t hate me XD we will get though them together!!!

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A Druid In Game Of Thrones

When a teacher dies to save his student, he is sent to the Game of Thrones universe by a R.O.B. Then he chooses to be a druid. Let's see what he can do when he wakes up as a commoner child. This is going to be a slow-burning series, and this is my first project as an author. He starts as weak as possible then he will get strong. If everything goes right, I'm thinking of writing 500 chapters at the very least, and this will not be a carbon copy of the plot. I m going to change things like the timeline, age and more. The story starts between Robert's Rebellion and Greyjoy's Rebellion. This is an AU. A/N: mc will trade his memories of the book and tv show to gain more power, but he will still remember his life in the modern world and will carry all the knowledge he gained in this world to his new life. I do this because I don't want an omniscient mc, I want him to make mistakes and develop by learning from these mistakes. Disclaimer: I don't own the ASOİAF or the G.O.T. series; they belong to author G.R.R. MARTİN. Cover art is taken from a stock photo site. A/N: there are knights in the north; they are just not called knights. Heavy cavalrymen in the north serve a nearly identical function to knights south of the Neck and are considered knights in all but name. I just don't want to call them cavalrymen. So there are knights in the north, but they don't take their oath to the seven. A/N: English is not my first language, so if there is a grammar issue, please tell me, and I will try to fix it. I will try to release 3-4 chapters a week. If you want to read ahead or donate, you can visit p-a-tre-on/kurowashi

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N0_Hope
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Writing Quality : 3/5 Stability of Updates : 4/5 Story Development : 3/5 Character Design : 3/5 World Background : 4/5 The main problem is not the grammar but the way the author has written the story . I'm not a native speaker but I can tell that I've read many stories and some of them have a proper way of writting and others ... It's not a bad thing, the author worked hard and tried but I would suggest reading official novels to have a reference point on the dialogues.

Vassago
VassagoLv12Vassago

I came into this on the assumption that it would be about a guy who was able to summon Spartans and a system around that Idea. instead we have your basic dude whi will automatically become a master of combat along will the warriors from for honor who put into a realistic setting become the equivalent of what lu bu from the the three kingdoms was said to be like in battle and to top it all off the mc goes for the basic wishes that every tom and harry does.

Slxxpy
SlxxpyLv13Slxxpy

Basic Basic Basic Basic Basic Basic Basic.

Derek_Morales
Derek_MoralesLv14Derek_Morales

It has great potential and great imagination. Can't wait to read more. I hope you as the author can slow the pace a little and focus on world/story/background building. I think the biggest mistake many authors make is a to fast pace of a story, little to no time for character development. But I enjoy read both your stories on web novel and hope you continue to write.

Dragonfenixx
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Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4Gd_Sys

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ZHODIAXK
ZHODIAXKLv3ZHODIAXK

I don't know broo, It is too cringe for me

HeartRend
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Writing quality: 2 stars - Just read the synopsis and you will understand. Grammer is abyssmal and reading becomes more painful than it should be. Stability of updates: 3 stars - look at chapter list to see update frequency, its sporattic. sometimes with a gap of a day, other times with a gap of 2 weeks. Story dev: 3 stars - idea is interesting, execution not so much. Author has a good imagination, but not the best literary skill. Character design/world backgroud: 2 star - hard to understand and not really built up. 2 stars becasue its a fanfic and people have a frame of reference from canon. Otherwise, not much is built up here. Overall: 2.4 - not recommended for someone new. Only if you are a literary masochist who is used to terrible grammer and botched writing.

MrHollow
MrHollowLv1MrHollow

A great fanfic. Has really big potential, but has some flows, like missing comas and dots. I really recommend

PABELO
PABELOLv4PABELO

It improves the quality of the writing a little more. Story development is very fast safe a bit to have more chapters, the way it is I think it will end up in 40~65 chapters and you won't have any more ideas for your book story. Character design is ok but if you improve the mc it will be much better. Background of the world; I feel like something's missing but I don't know how to tell you author.

Honest_dude
Honest_dudeLv1Honest_dude

meh. Pretty Average, i am not complaining tho. just that it feels like our mc is going to be speed running through this 3 stars is max i can give to this

Wanda_8252
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WintyLP
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nice

ArzeusT
ArzeusTLv13ArzeusT

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