HeartRend

Thanks for the chap. Love the direction the story is going, just wish the pace was a bit faster. At this point a few chapters went by and it’s only been a few days in the novel

Honestly pretty good. A bit of wish fullfillment, but its a good, smart MC. Writing style is also unique, but i like that it avoids a lot of unnecessary filler.

great chat, nice to see other perspectives

Ty for chapter!

Honestly if he does then I quit. What’s the point of becoming so much stronger than a campione if u can’t even beat anyone?

nice time skip, ty. Hopefully this doesn't devolve too much into smut, and focuses more on the plot.

Great progress and update schedule. I would say the charachter development is a little lacking, as ther personality shift of the MC is a bit fast/extreme. Still pretty good and feels good to fine a Campione fanfic with an OC main charachter - Goudo was just too beta for my liking for someone with that much power.

+1

Ugh kinda annoying how much MC is protecting or favouring Xiao Guy