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Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar

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Everything has an end. Everything has a limit of strength. There is a ceiling beyond which it is impossible to grow. But at the end, you can find a new path, repair or reshape a broken object, and break through the ceiling. Weaknesses can be overcome, and shortcomings turned into an advantage. I know that well. I learned it on myself. {Author: Шэтэл-Соркен (shatal-sorken)} https://ficbook.net/authors/1711049

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omiguh
omiguhLv4omiguh

For everyone disliking it because it seems almost like a diary or journal, it's just the authors way to skip a few years as quickly as possible while still telling us some important information for the future. If the story started at the beginning when the storytime(diary) started then it would take 20-25 chapters to get where we are currently in the timeline. I wouldnt be surprised if it took longer. It was basically a training montage, we get to see his psychosis and we get to see his trauma. We didnt need to go into too much depth for it

Br4tsch
Br4tschLv14Br4tsch

I dont get it why so many are rating this ff so high. This Story is more like a diary and not a novel.

ErickHenrique_BR
ErickHenrique_BRLv5ErickHenrique_BR

I'm reading a diary, in the first chapter I thought it was bizarre and strange, I didn't like it, then I read the second and confirmed... I hate this type of story, I should put it in the title like a diary or in the synopsis

Vastoking
VastokingLv5Vastoking

The mc TALKS TOO MUCH AND OVER SHARES. Also is VERY INCONSISTENT AT TIMEs, these factors annoy me greatly, however the story is actually pretty good though their is some slight Sokka bashing. It has a unique take on the avatar world, I'll recommend you try it, though their are some really annoying thing the mc does, if you can ignore those then you will likely enjoy this.

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14DetachedDreamer

Really bad writing style in the beginning with a very generic origin. which is confusing since this author spoke about wanting to write this fanfic for a while but obviously didn't spend an ounce of creativity for the start of his fanfic. putting aside the fact that avatar is the weakest world to be a villian in, the MC just comes off as weak, of the mind. like he feels like a victim who deserves acknowledgement but is too edgy to say it out loud. kinda like sasuke but gay. Honestly nothing deserving of appreciation except for the attempt. at least not yet.

Orginal_Panda
Orginal_PandaLv5Orginal_Panda

this guy know how to wirte a novel 10/10 dont skip this one guys just read a few chapters and tell me this is not your new number one

Kr0n
Kr0nLv11Kr0n

The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news! John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God. For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey youtube.com/livingwaters

Genesis_you
Genesis_youLv2Genesis_you

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UselessYato
UselessYatoLv14UselessYato

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Drunk_Hermit
Drunk_HermitLv14Drunk_Hermit

A great FF. 58 chapters of a great adventure and the last 2 of how to fk up a masterpiece

THEBADger
THEBADgerLv4THEBADger

it's great, no writing errors, the story has a great flow, and it pulls you in.

KexKexKex
KexKexKexLv14KexKexKex

Short review: It's good. Things that might bother you: 1] The first 5 chapters are the mc telling a guard his life's story up to the present time. Some readers seem to be bothered by it, but it just skips the same old boring reincarnation, past life identity, and baby phase and starts the story at a more interesting point. 2] The grammar might feel iffy since it is a translation, but nothing that would take me out of the story.

Evade
EvadeLv4Evade

Just wanna ask, would this FF last? Or just another whim of a playful mind, Let's find out.

DeathE
DeathELv13DeathE

I am waiting more chaps, please keep this up

Razorcat
RazorcatLv4Razorcat

Very good story, a bit confusing at the start but makes sense later on

Brian20
Brian20Lv14Brian20

very good novel so far can't wait to read more.

Daoist_Grandmaster
Daoist_GrandmasterLv4Daoist_Grandmaster

Noice keep it up! If you keep up the consistency this story will rise fast. Looking forward to more. Can’t wait to see the Mac interact with notable characters in the series.

AstrosBR
AstrosBRLv2AstrosBR

Isso foi incrível, comecei a ler pensando que tinha encontrado bronze, talvez prata, mas achei ouro, e com o tempo podendo se tornar um diamante

minmix
minmixLv1minmix

BUENO DE MOMENTO UN POCO INTERESANTE OBSERVARE SU DESAROLLO ANIMO ESCRITOR TU PUEDES. [img=exp] NOMAS UNA PREGUNTA TENDRA ALGO QUE VER CON LA TRAMA Y EN QUE AÑO ESTA Xd ??????

mercurystarship
mercurystarshipLv2mercurystarship

This fic is okay, but pretty average. It's well written but doesn't really grab you, and can get a bit boring at times. The info dumps are annoying and mess with the vibe. It's better than most stuff on webnovel but still missing something cool.

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