DeathE

to be fair though, there are a few reasons to drop in 1-2 Chaps -Trash translation or grammar -Annoying writing style( For example, authors/Translators that decide to use anything but quotation marks. As well as bullet pointed or choppy writing) -Blatant and heavy AI usage trash - A decision that grinds your gears( If I see a decision that genuinely gets under my skin, I'd rather not spend the next 10-20mins trying to push through it, ill read the reviews and see whether it gets better and even then ill probably take a break)

yup

Aenys as in the body part? .............

I thought the beginning was alright, not great not bad. But around middle it just got a bit wierd, some details were skipped over, he repeats himself about pizza maybe 6 or 7 times at camp half blood, and immediately after that it changed to a bullet point format like the other guy said. "Letter from hogwarts" blah blah blah "The Departure" Blah blah blah Overall, a bit disappointing.

Feels a little rough, but I'm looking forward to reading this when there are more chs