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mercurystarshipLv21yr
2024-02-18 11:38

This fic is okay, but pretty average. It's well written but doesn't really grab you, and can get a bit boring at times. The info dumps are annoying and mess with the vibe. It's better than most stuff on webnovel but still missing something cool.

Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar

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4.3
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omiguh
omiguhLv4

For everyone disliking it because it seems almost like a diary or journal, it's just the authors way to skip a few years as quickly as possible while still telling us some important information for the future. If the story started at the beginning when the storytime(diary) started then it would take 20-25 chapters to get where we are currently in the timeline. I wouldnt be surprised if it took longer. It was basically a training montage, we get to see his psychosis and we get to see his trauma. We didnt need to go into too much depth for it

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ErickHenrique_BR
ErickHenrique_BRLv5

I'm reading a diary, in the first chapter I thought it was bizarre and strange, I didn't like it, then I read the second and confirmed... I hate this type of story, I should put it in the title like a diary or in the synopsis

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Vastoking
VastokingLv6

The mc TALKS TOO MUCH AND OVER SHARES. Also is VERY INCONSISTENT AT TIMEs, these factors annoy me greatly, however the story is actually pretty good though their is some slight Sokka bashing. It has a unique take on the avatar world, I'll recommend you try it, though their are some really annoying thing the mc does, if you can ignore those then you will likely enjoy this.

1yr
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

Really bad writing style in the beginning with a very generic origin. which is confusing since this author spoke about wanting to write this fanfic for a while but obviously didn't spend an ounce of creativity for the start of his fanfic. putting aside the fact that avatar is the weakest world to be a villian in, the MC just comes off as weak, of the mind. like he feels like a victim who deserves acknowledgement but is too edgy to say it out loud. kinda like sasuke but gay. Honestly nothing deserving of appreciation except for the attempt. at least not yet.

1yr
Orginal_Panda
Orginal_PandaLv5

this guy know how to wirte a novel 10/10 dont skip this one guys just read a few chapters and tell me this is not your new number one

1yr
Kr0n
Kr0nLv11

The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news! John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God. For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey youtube.com/livingwaters

1yr
Genesis_you
Genesis_youLv2

Reveal spoiler

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UselessYato
UselessYatoLv14

Reveal spoiler

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Drunk_Hermit
Drunk_HermitLv14

A great FF. 58 chapters of a great adventure and the last 2 of how to fk up a masterpiece

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Evade
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Just wanna ask, would this FF last? Or just another whim of a playful mind, Let's find out.

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