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A Dragon ball System With A Cultivation World

Penulis: Itachi102
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Baca novel A Dragon ball System With A Cultivation World yang ditulis oleh penulis Itachi102 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. I got Bad Grammer...

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Yu Yuehan adalah seorang presiden direktur yang kaya, sempurna, dan tidak mudah didekati seperti orang kaya pada umumnya - pria terkaya di Kota H; tapi suatu hari, seorang bocah perempuan tiba-tiba muncul dalam hidupnya sebagai putrinya! Walaupun pria itu cukup yakin dirinya tidak pernah menyentuh wanita sebelumnya, hasil tes DNA memastikan bahwa bocah itu adalah anaknya! Segera ia menjadi seorang 'papi' yang baik bagi bocah mungil itu, Xiao Liuliu. Dua tahun kemudian, untuk beberapa alasan yang tidak dapat dijelaskan, Xiao Liuliu menjadi sangat menyukai seorang perawat yang sedang dalam masa percobaan, Nian Xiaomu, yang dipekerjakan untuk merawat Xiao Liuliu. Nian Xiaomu memiliki kepribadian yang kuat dan tidak membiarkan siapa pun merundungnya. Terus-menerus khawatir jika ada yang akan mencelakai putrinya, Yu Yuehan selalu mengawasi Nian Xiaomu. Namun, putrinya yang terlihat baik dan manis di luar, diam-diam mempunyai rencana untuk ayahnya .... Waktu berlalu, Nian Xiaomu menunjukkan sisi yang memikat sedikit demi sedikit; dan untuk pertama kali dalam hidupnya, Yu Yuehan tertarik pada wanita misterius ini .... Kata Kunci: Putri yang Misterius, Putri yang Manis, Tidak Mudah Didekati, Wanita Kuat Adegan yang manis: “Papi, Papi sangat tampan!” pipi Xiao Liuliu memerah. “Papi, aku mau digendong!” Xiao Liuliu merengek. “Papi, aku mau adik perempuan! Ayo cepat buat bersama Mami.” “Papi ....” Yu Yuehan berkata dengan ekspresi datar, "Aku tidak pernah tidur dengan wanita mana pun! Bagaimana mungkin aku mempunyai seorang anak perempuan!?" “Apa Mami tidur dengan Papi tanpa Papi sadari?” Yu Yuehan: "…"

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What would you do if a game character suddenly came out of your mobile phone? That was what Abbie, a very chubby girl, experienced after suffering rejection and humiliation from the man she liked. She met a blonde beauty who was looking for a candidate to test a special game. This game could grant any wish for the one who cleared it. "You will have a handsome man at your beck and call 24 hours a day, 7 days a week!" The mysterious girl tempted her with the words she wanted to hear. "You can make him your boyfriend, your hubby, or your slave. Whatever floats your boat, darling, you can do it!" Seduced by the offer, Abbie agreed to play the game but... "Are you my Master?" the sweet and angelic voice of a child sounded inside the room. These were the first words that Abbie heard when she summoned her hero to the real world through her mobile phone. "What happened to the promised good looking boyfriend? Where's my hubby?! What's this?! A little boy?! I didn't ask for this!" It was the start of an epic journey where a young lady learned what it was like to fall in love with a game character and the happiness that came along with it. Go! Go! Summons! ---------- Chapter Releases: 1 Guaranteed Chapter Everyday Bonus Chapters 500 votes = 1 bonus chapter 1000 votes = 2 bonus chapters 1,500 and above = 3 bonus chapters (I don't want to go for quantity, but quality in making chapters.) Feel free to donate in my Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/YourSir Chat with me on Discord! https://discord.gg/haeYN7N P.S I would like to thank RedPandaChick for helping me edit my chapters. Feel free to visit her Facebook Page! https://www.facebook.com/AeroiasHolisticGarden/ I do not own the cover Photo. Credits go to its respective owner.

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Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10Daoist_Dan

Light Spoilers. Didn't hit the spoiler button because paragraph separations disappear when I do. The first 50 percent was good. But the author merced his own story with a stupid joke that turned out to not be a joke. You might find the mc's rival being named Giga Chad hilarious but I don't. And that's not to mention how poorly written into the story he actually was. It broke the vibes the story had been building the entire story. Anyway, be forewarned so maybe this doesn't bug you as much as it did me. I was honestly enjoying this story before Giga Chad became a central part. Total score 2.6 Writing Quality - 3. Neither good or bad. I didn't notice either way. Stability of Updates - 4. I never give 5 unless a story is completed. But 4 is well deserved for stable updates. Story Development - 1. Because F you. (Story is a 4 without Giga tho) Character Design - 1. Because F Giga. (Would have been a 3) World Background - 4. Honestly very interesting.

TFH
TFHLv6TFH

well... ita not bad. author just dosnt really knows how to write well and there are some holes in his story and mistakes and contradictions. Such as soul cultivation, mc says nobody in the village knows much about it and that level 2 allows for spiritual sense (radar) of 10 meters. but his father was outside of the house in the main plaza but could sense mc despite being far away from his home. Thus making his father spiritual sense at least 500 meters. thus the contradiction. also author skips stuff without noticing, at one moment the father was in the plaza, at the next was in the protagonist room. It was not mentioned he moved

TeraBaapHuMai
TeraBaapHuMaiLv3TeraBaapHuMai

I don't have problem with bad grammer and spelling mistakes, but what i have problem is with how system and his father are babysitting a 18 year old. He is 18 for god's sake man.

Warren_Yanga
Warren_YangaLv3Warren_Yanga

BRUH THE AUTHOR REALLY LIKES TO MESS WITH BLOODLINES. YOU CAN MAKE A Dragon Ball X Cultivation without a "System" and make the bloodline a saiyan only That way the author has no way to mess with bloodlines and having to Early Op MC. and the readers now can read a real "Weak To Strong" Genre.

Lizrock
LizrockLv4Lizrock

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DaoistsGHarm
DaoistsGHarmLv4DaoistsGHarm

More More More More More More More More More More More More!!

Metasight
MetasightLv13Metasight

I like this story a whole bunch, I hope more authors wright stories like this. I hope this story continues. If I had the $ to pay for more I would.

xCzed
xCzedLv13xCzed

Waiting for more. Good luck to you Author-san.

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