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i_like_pizza8mthCommentéFail!
But first, a rubber band.- i_like_pizza8mthCommenté
Does plp actually like dense MC? i feel sick every time i see them. Just so dumb and wasted.
"Tch, you gotta give it to them straight. They're dense as a brick." Aka clicked her tongue. - i_like_pizza8mthCommenté
This guy its gay, 100 % sure now.
"Should I file a restraining order?" Ronin raised a brow and Miyako pouted. - i_like_pizza9mthCommenté
Too lame or excuse, can u put a bit more of brain in the story
'Okay. That's done.' Haruto thought to himself before he also went on his way to exit the school. - i_like_pizza1yrCommenté
1000% hypocrite.
'Am I too greedy to ask for Zero Two's love now that I found someone who I can love? Am I not just like Yokoyama Nana? Hiding all my past, which could hurt Zero Two...? Am I a hypocrite...? But in the end, I am not someone who will hurt Zero Two like her. I am not a monster to let her suffer the same fate that I had to in my life.' - i_like_pizza1yrCommenté
Nice choice!
"From some time ago, actually. And I didn't want to use it. Right now, we don't have a choice." He scanned their surprised faces and folded his arms over his chest. "We're relocating to the human world." - i_like_pizza1yrRépondu à RagingDrake
Just to remind you friend, not long ago cousin marriage was very normal, even now some "nobles" choose to marry each other to maintain blood purity. Personally, as long as there is true love, I don't care if the brothers get together.
"Really?! Thank you so much!" She jumped up with an ecstatic expression and hugged him tightly, burying her face in his neck. He naturally wrapped his arms around her waist with a light smile. - i_like_pizza1yrCommenté
cowards choice. too bored
Davos analyzed and finally opted for option 3 - i_like_pizza1yrCommentéCh -2 Characters And Info
- i_like_pizza1yrRépondu à Felwinter
The last chapters have been very good. It is only the first ones that should be modified a bit. Keep it up.
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - i_like_pizza1yrCommenté
Its Dante gay or something? he literally says Vergil in every sentence, i mean its annoying as f... give ur MC a life dude.
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - i_like_pizza1yrRépondu à IWriteFanfic
Thanks, I don't mean that he knows the whole plot, but for example he knows that someone very powerful (Aizen) is observing and experimenting with Ichigo, that the arrancars are going to attack the city and they are very strong, the Quincy, Soul society creates problems for anyone no Shinigami that is not part of the court, personally I feel that the novel sits a lot in an ordinary life of the MC and does not train or fight, Bleach after all is an action story, not so much "romantic".
Ch 14 Almost Killing Ichigo - i_like_pizza1yrCommenté
Good chapter, it's interesting that the MC stops hating Ichigo, it's better that he just consider him a problematic person and keep his distance but at first it was as if he considered him an enemy. And Author can make the MC absorb the knowledge of a slightly stronger soul that at least gives him some knowledge of the future. Because it seems to me that the MC is still playing and not becoming strong, unaware of the horrors that surround him.
Ch 14 Almost Killing Ichigo - i_like_pizza1yrRépondu à IWriteFanfic
100%. It's sad that they turned him into a jerk once he got the full Hōgyoku. I love how he played everyone on the show.
"You will stay out of my way and never question me again." - i_like_pizza1yrCommenté
This guy its so naive, its hilarious. Cant he see, hes already in Aizen Sosuke sight if even Urahara already know about him, peaceful life mi balls!
"You will stay out of my way and never question me again." - i_like_pizza1yrRépondu à Metalloid
prolly too smal. he need 2 to make her feel something
She says in a very seductive in yet nervous tone which he sees this invitation he begins to walk slowly towards her placing both of his dicks towards the entrance of her pussy although since he has two decks making her even more nervous but still not rejecting it. - i_like_pizza1yrCommenté
Autor need to speed up MC power, bleach time line its like 1 or 2 years at most.
Kai hesitantly opened his eyes, only to find himself once again enveloped in darkness. The room he was in seemed unfamiliar, and a faint sense of dread crept up on him. As he looked around, he noticed small, flickering lights of various sizes floating around him, glowing in shades of gray, ice blue, and white. Just like the last time he was here, each light had a core that seemed to represent a different element – one with a fiery core, another with an icy core, and so on.