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Twilight: Omega

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Synopsis

The story is about a Chris who gets put in Twilight but he doesn't have much knowledge of the world, because he didn't see the movies... how will he survive in the world of Twilight.

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3.9
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Adrian_Putra_3580
Adrian_Putra_3580Lv1Adrian_Putra_3580

My opinion the MC is a good guy,not cautios and smart and maybe have a mental problem he expecting Edward to read his mind(100% true) but he not doing anything to defense againts it like not going to fork he do not have obligation to go there🤔 because that place is dangerous and 99% the danger is because Bella and the reason she still a live because she is the main character and he is a normal human he do not know if he have power before he go to fork but he still choose to go to fork not really a smart move. Its just my opinion good luck on tour work author 🙏👍👍

BAD_MAN
BAD_MANLv5BAD_MAN

Révéler le spoiler

Jesus_Villa_1898
Jesus_Villa_1898Lv1Jesus_Villa_1898

Estaría genial si estuviera bien hecho, el contexto no es detallado, la calidad de escritura le falta, no hay estabilidad de actualización y el diseño de personajes está horrible.

Joao_Silva_0541
Joao_Silva_0541Lv2Joao_Silva_0541

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bloodcoler
bloodcolerLv1bloodcoler

harem like wolf pack please for ticket THE HAREM

kamran_ein
kamran_einLv15kamran_ein

I like the story, wish updates were more frequent but the author is doing their thing so can't really complain. This story is very similar to another twilight fanfic, (almost the exact same) obviously there are differences. A good read so far and am eager to see how the story progresses

Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeee

LastGod
LastGodLv4LastGod

I think this is a decent fanfic. But it def could have been better. The good points are the story and the MC they are cool and i like their character. The main problem is the finer points. The two big ones are the romance between the MC and his girl seeming to be very weak and thin feeling like there was no real relationship there just a cordiality that included kissing. The other week point is the character dialog not being enough to make you care about the characters. The MC seem mostly fleshed out but the other characters didn't seem to have as solid a foundation or they were not given enough time or dialog for us to understand their character. Another good point thought was the action that really was awesome and kept you entertain all in all it was a decent read.

Alex_Boen
Alex_BoenLv14Alex_Boen

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Nandu_Gandhi
Nandu_GandhiLv1Nandu_Gandhi

.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Good job with the story

Abhi_rathore
Abhi_rathoreLv1Abhi_rathore

......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Please continue

Jadu_Pandey
Jadu_PandeyLv1Jadu_Pandey

Pretty nice the story is very similar to the TWILIGHT new wolf but this is a little better it has a lot common with it particularly the 5th chapter otherwise it is a nice story

Tv_Tv_7716
Tv_Tv_7716Lv1Tv_Tv_7716

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titan10
titan10Lv14titan10

I hope u update more than one chapter. .....................................................................................................

Cinvera
CinveraLv2Cinvera

Aside from the awkward start, it's a good read overall .................................................... ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Jack7032
Jack7032Lv12Jack7032

hope you don't drop this it's good stuff so far......................... . . ....... ... ..................... ...............

titan10
titan10Lv14titan10

Very very good man keep up the good work and don't drop.....................................................................................

titan10
titan10Lv14titan10

He dropped it...........................No update in 10 days he won't update anymore............................................M***********.

Alex_Boen_2677
Alex_Boen_2677Lv1Alex_Boen_2677

I enjoyed. Dont drop 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

SrLao
SrLaoLv11SrLao

Calidad de la escritura (3/5); Estabilidad de las actualizaciones (3/5); Desarrollo de la historia (1/5); Diseño de personaje (1/5); Fondo mundial (1/5).

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