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The Journey To The Top (Multiversal fanfic) [Completed]

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What is The Journey To The Top (Multiversal fanfic) [Completed]

Lisez le roman The Journey To The Top (Multiversal fanfic) [Completed] écrit par l'auteur SentToOblivion publié sur WebNovel. This is my first fanfic critisism is welcomedJoin disc: https://discord.gg/FxBh8eGXSynopsis:A soul drifts away from the cycle of reincarnation and into the void, something that has never happened befo...

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This is my first fanfic critisism is welcomed Join disc: https://discord.gg/FxBh8eGX Synopsis: A soul drifts away from the cycle of reincarnation and into the void, something that has never happened before. A large amount of time passes with nothing happening, until an entity appears before the soul. Read to find out more. Current world: DxD Finished worlds: Arifureta Cover is not mine Characters and the original story in this fanfic are also not mine all credit goes to their respective creators. I will say this now this novel is pretty cliché, I am not forcing you to read. If you’re dissatisfied about the direction, flow or any other aspect of the novel you are free to leave and if you choose to leave a comment on the way out please make it helpful, and not something you wrote just to be hurtful. Please enjoy. Also mc is strong since chap 4 be warned Also, try to read until the start of Tortus before leaving criticism AU elements

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“Isn’t it possible you like him?” Han Meiyi asked the beautiful woman sitting across her, one eyebrow raising towards the handsome older man walking towards the counter to grab their orders. His back view was glorious; with perfect broad shoulders, a thin torso, and straight long legs. Perfect muscles, and gorgeous face, he was. “Yeah, he’s pleasant to look at.” Responded Yang Li, without hesitation or suspicion that her friend meant another thing. Sighing and rolling her eyes, the short-haired teenager rephrased her question: “Do you like Yu Jie Lin? Romantically.” The last added part caused Yang Li to wrinkle her lovely eyebrows. Did she like him romantically? She didn’t know. All she knows is that she likes how he makes her feel all sorts of different emotions she never experienced before. But were they romantic-like? They probably were, they probably weren’t. Anyway, she’ll get the answer soon when she ask her classmates, or the teachers. Perhaps one of her cousins? Her relationship with some of them have significantly improved, after all. Yang Li looked over her shoulder to the said-man, he was just holding the steel tray and taking it back to the table, when he caught her eyes and smiled automatically. The smile was so blinding Yang Li and Han Meiyi sucked in a breath. In front of her, her best friend pleaded, “Please, husband him!” ❀❀❀ Yang Li had sacrificed the last ten years of her life to avenge her parents’ injustice. Throughout her journey; she was stabbed, broken, and even alone. Her legs were damaged, and she commit suicide in the lake. But shortly after she succumbed to death, she found she could open her eyes to watch the sun rise from her window. She discovered she returned ten years back into the past. This time, she’s determined to find true friends, and fix her broken goods. And in which he follows his love to the past to spoil her. ❀❀❀ Some chapters will contain mature content not appropriate for young children.

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Tonyorobsky
TonyorobskyLv13Tonyorobsky

Journey to the top? Became OP by chapter 4 and a god by the following chapter. Roll credits. There is no journey to the top. It’s journey of an overpowered god without limitations to his interactions with mortals, as he goes collecting girls and play in the children’s playground (read ‘mortal realm where he is OP but will pretend to not be OP’)

Holy_Crap
Holy_CrapLv3Holy_Crap

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Destroyer404
Destroyer404Lv14Destroyer404

Fast Pace but in a good way I hope and expect more chapter since the novel is so good and I mean one of the best and I cant really find many arifureta ff since it is either dropped or in hiatus. If you like op mc and loving wholesome harem with good development then this is for you

SentToOblivion
SentToOblivionAuteurSentToOblivion

Honest review from me. In my opinion you should only read this when your bored and other novels in your list aren’t updated. Pretry cliché in some aspects. This is my first fic and as such I do have stuff I need to work on. I am however confident in my release schedule. Still, you yourself might find this to your liking and in that case please do leave a review.

HatefulRaijin
HatefulRaijinLv4HatefulRaijin

The novel is fast-paced, the grammar is passable, and with the rate at which the mc is getting stronger I find it hard for him to have problems as he can simply just crush it with his raw power alone but due to the enjoyment I receive reading this I gave it this score. If I do rate it as a novel the score ranges from 3.7-4.1 imo if you have nothing to read it's a fine time waster and considering this is just the beginning I reckon you can make it better.

Wynwalker_Mcstubby
Wynwalker_McstubbyLv4Wynwalker_Mcstubby

Good book it’ just easygoing somthing to read when you had a long day and just want to relax The MC is likable and I love the fact he doesn’t start blushing and stuttering every time he speaks with a female that trope is so overdone in most fanfics

Spielar
SpielarLv2Spielar

This story is a hundred percent wish fulfillment to the point that it is difficult to even look at it without wanting to flip the table because of how unrealistic the relationships are. Please for the love of all that is holy don't ever write something like this again.

_Nyx_Wk_
_Nyx_Wk_Lv13_Nyx_Wk_

fast paced story but not bad.mc become op in the beginning of the novel but its still enjoyble to read.romance is okay...overall a decent read...

DaoistjcJwtW
DaoistjcJwtWLv1DaoistjcJwtW

Buena la historia me encanta sigue así 👌😸👌👌😸👌👌 casi no hay historia de arifureta sigue así 👌😸👌👌 me encanta sigue así 😃😃😊😃😃😊😊😃😊😃😃😊😊😊😊😃😊😃😃 iibuena historia sería bueno que ponga de que piensa de mc o suposición de los demás personas acerqua del compañero etc un consejo

KeVon_Moore
KeVon_MooreLv3KeVon_Moore

it's a really good story i suggest you read it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍[img=coins]👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Diky_Maulana
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Updated updated updated updated updated updated updated updated updated updated updated updated updated updated updated updated updated updated

MaSeTeR
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Lucifer515
Lucifer515Lv4Lucifer515

Read it if you don’t have anything to read

HeartofBraum
HeartofBraumLv1HeartofBraum

A rather ‘generic’ wish fulfilment fic, it is nothing particularly special but likewise it doesn’t do anything particularly bad. It is a good fast paced read with reliable update stability to enjoy when you are struggling to find other stuff. My only real criticism is that the fast pacing doesn’t really allow much character definition for the harem members.

Mad8Ham
Mad8HamLv4Mad8Ham

AYO why does this not have a rating. this is fast paced. I like the story and how it is developing. what world is the MC going to go to next?

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