Spotted By Grindelwald And Went To Hogwarts

this is a good book i enjoyed it till now i usually drop complete au fics but this one kept me hooked till now . but the fact that 5 out of 17 of the reviews are by 4 accounts each made on the same day and has only ever commented on this book with 2-3 books read is suspicious dont make fake reviews author san

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Well, this is another work that I've taken an interest in it. To be honest, it's very interesting by the fact so many things are different in this world, I very much love Grindelwald so, yeah, he do caught my attention everytime he appears.

#Chapter 11,Reparo charm for repair and author write it for cold to make his coke chilled. I don't even know,if I read next few chapters , if writer going to make same easy to search mistakes. Can somebody tell me,is it same in other chapters to?

I really don't understand anyone in this novel. it is the worst harry Potter fanfic I've ever read. I don't get the world background at all even when I've read till 40+ chapters the story doesn't make sense. I don't recommend this novel.

The most boring and weak MC i've ever seen, always manipulated, easily scared or astounded, scared of his own power,.

I would give it more but theres some major flaws imo. 1. Accents there has not been any attempt at using local accents or words, no merlins beard no bloody h*ll (censoring cause wn censors when i dont censor) nada. 2. Some of the translation have an actual word for. For example Sean the mc gets a "winged demon" whats a winged demon? Must be a made-up creature, a little plot convienent but creativity points, oh wait thats a Swooping Evil.

You know, the idea that there's Nurmengard School in this universe already gave me hooked on the story in the first place and I am really interested in how the story evolves.

the plot feels rushed, forced and incomplete. when the representatives of the schools showed up they behaved childish and showed no manners. also it felt forced that the MC didn't get the chance to gather more information on the magical world to make a more educated decision on which school to chose .

full au. with bland character design.the story gives CN vipes off that in this kind of fic feels unsettling to me...

The animal he has are - -The Selma was a gigantic serpent native to the icy freshwater lakes of Norway. Unlike the peaceful sea serpent, the Selma was a ferocious and carnivorous beast, consisting on a diet of fish and human flesh.-The Wampus cat was a magical cat native to the United States, specifically Appalachia.[2] It was one of the four house symbols of Ilvermorny School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.[3]-The Hebridean Black was a dragon species native to the Hebrides islands of Scotland. It had brilliant purple coloured eyes-The Wyvern[1] was a giant, winged magical beast that possessed the ability to inflate sections of its body-The Thunderbird was a large, magical avian beast native to North America, and most commonly found in Arizona in the southwestern United States.[1][2] A close relative of the phoenix,[2] the Thunderbird could create storms as it flew and was highly sensitive to danger-The Swooping Evil was a blue-and-green winged dark[1] magical beast.It appeared similar to an extremely large butterfly, but with a wolf-like skull in place of an ordinary head. When it was not flying with its spiked wings, the Swooping Evil shrunk into a green spiny cocoon.It could be quite dangerous, as it was an encephalophage — it fed on human brains — and its tough green skin had the ability to deflect at least some spells. It secreted venom that, when properly diluted, could be used to erase bad memories.[4] If stung by a Swooping Evil, a person could quickly lose their minds, although the affliction was reversible-The Occamy was a winged, serpentine magical beast native to the Far East and India.A fully grown OccamyIt was a plumed, two-legged serpentine-bodied creature with wings that reached up to fifteen feet in height. The Occamy was extremely aggressive to anyone who approached it, and lived off of insects, rats, birds, and occasionally monkeys. It was extremely protective of its eggs, which were made of the most pure and soft silver-

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4 go with it. The story has too much great plot, and it's too big .What's happening is interesting, and there are just questions and no answers. Read the story and check what happens. it's like watching a story with just the right story and drama and jokes are okay. MC is well so so will have to read more, and the Roman don't know yet, but it's there give it a try and f what people say if it's bad f what i say read it for your self and then see for your self oh and first 20 chapter are so so almost quite the story but around 30 or so it just got good for no reason

where is the system? is it going to come back? last I remember it was like during the mc's 1st year at Hogwarts. I'm now currently at mc's 2nd year but his system interactions poofed since then. that's kinda cold considering that almost 70+ chapters since the interface system poofed.

usually I don't really like fics that diverge too much from canon, but this fics great. amazing work. the systems not too op which is good for long term.

Good enough, while there may be some things that i find it weird it's passable with things that are presented, looking forward to it as it developed into a pretty interesting plot development

It has Newt Scamander, what can I say more? although now he's an old man, but putting him in this world setting is pretty interesting not gonna lie

i dig the MC very much, idk why but I like the characterization here throughout the story

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Honestly the best Harry Potter ff on here by far. Even the most popular ones stick to the story but this does something completely different and it does it well. I really recommend this story