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malhiharjot
malhiharjotLv31yr
2024-01-15 00:30

#Chapter 11,Reparo charm for repair and author write it for cold to make his coke chilled. I don't even know,if I read next few chapters , if writer going to make same easy to search mistakes. Can somebody tell me,is it same in other chapters to?

Spotted By Grindelwald And Went To Hogwarts

Poka_Poka
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lordhokage
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this is a good book i enjoyed it till now i usually drop complete au fics but this one kept me hooked till now . but the fact that 5 out of 17 of the reviews are by 4 accounts each made on the same day and has only ever commented on this book with 2-3 books read is suspicious dont make fake reviews author san

1yr

Reimoss
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Reveal spoiler

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Poka_Poka
Poka_PokaAuthor

Well, this is another work that I've taken an interest in it. To be honest, it's very interesting by the fact so many things are different in this world, I very much love Grindelwald so, yeah, he do caught my attention everytime he appears.

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Jyshasura
JyshasuraLv4

I really don't understand anyone in this novel. it is the worst harry Potter fanfic I've ever read. I don't get the world background at all even when I've read till 40+ chapters the story doesn't make sense. I don't recommend this novel.

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Jadefrog
JadefrogLv5

The most boring and weak MC i've ever seen, always manipulated, easily scared or astounded, scared of his own power,.

1yr
DartUpdates
DartUpdatesLv14

I would give it more but theres some major flaws imo. 1. Accents there has not been any attempt at using local accents or words, no merlins beard no bloody h*ll (censoring cause wn censors when i dont censor) nada. 2. Some of the translation have an actual word for. For example Sean the mc gets a "winged demon" whats a winged demon? Must be a made-up creature, a little plot convienent but creativity points, oh wait thats a Swooping Evil.

1yr
Minibeee
MinibeeeLv1

You know, the idea that there's Nurmengard School in this universe already gave me hooked on the story in the first place and I am really interested in how the story evolves.

1yr
DestroyingPaper
DestroyingPaperLv4

the plot feels rushed, forced and incomplete. when the representatives of the schools showed up they behaved childish and showed no manners. also it felt forced that the MC didn't get the chance to gather more information on the magical world to make a more educated decision on which school to chose .

1yr
OloEyktan
OloEyktanLv4

full au. with bland character design.the story gives CN vipes off that in this kind of fic feels unsettling to me...

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