this is a good book i enjoyed it till now i usually drop complete au fics but this one kept me hooked till now . but the fact that 5 out of 17 of the reviews are by 4 accounts each made on the same day and has only ever commented on this book with 2-3 books read is suspicious dont make fake reviews author san

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Well, this is another work that I've taken an interest in it. To be honest, it's very interesting by the fact so many things are different in this world, I very much love Grindelwald so, yeah, he do caught my attention everytime he appears.

#Chapter 11,Reparo charm for repair and author write it for cold to make his coke chilled. I don't even know,if I read next few chapters , if writer going to make same easy to search mistakes. Can somebody tell me,is it same in other chapters to?

The most boring and weak MC i've ever seen, always manipulated, easily scared or astounded, scared of his own power,.

I would give it more but theres some major flaws imo. 1. Accents there has not been any attempt at using local accents or words, no merlins beard no bloody h*ll (censoring cause wn censors when i dont censor) nada. 2. Some of the translation have an actual word for. For example Sean the mc gets a "winged demon" whats a winged demon? Must be a made-up creature, a little plot convienent but creativity points, oh wait thats a Swooping Evil.

You know, the idea that there's Nurmengard School in this universe already gave me hooked on the story in the first place and I am really interested in how the story evolves.

the plot feels rushed, forced and incomplete. when the representatives of the schools showed up they behaved childish and showed no manners. also it felt forced that the MC didn't get the chance to gather more information on the magical world to make a more educated decision on which school to chose .

full au. with bland character design.the story gives CN vipes off that in this kind of fic feels unsettling to me...